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Inspired by FEUniverse's Void Blitzare Adventure, a project where every user contribute to design level, character, weapons, etc to make a Fire Emblem Romhack together, I wondered if I can do the same with DB Custom Card.

So ladies and gentleman, I present you my project: Forumblitz Archetype!

The Project is simple: Everyone create and submit their own "Forumblitz" card to add to the archetype in order to make it a fully fledged Archetype.
Here's some rules:
1. Everyone can only contribute 2 cards to the Archetype. However, after some time of inactivity, I might allow those who have submitted cards to contribute 2 more cards. (04/04/2020) Rejected card does not count toward this limit.
2. The cards must be public!
3. All skill are welcome! Whatever you're new, still learning, or is a pro in Custom Card, feel free to submit your card.
4. Support card that aren't part of "Forumblitz" card are okay, as long as it specifically support "Forumblitz" cards. For example “Gem-Knights” have “Absorb Fusion”, “Crystal Beasts” have “Rainbow Bridge“, etc.
5. (24/02/2021) There's not really a theme or restriction to follow here other than the card must be sensible and reasonable. Just add anything you like to the archetype.
6. (24/02/2021) I'm not taking balance into consideration for now. Maybe if this project is a success, I will make a second blitz archetype where it will be considered.
7. I might add additional rule just in case.

I'll start by submitting my own 2 cards.
Forumblitz Rookie
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2183281
Forumblitz Field Commander
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2183273

Current Card List: https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7505254

I might want to give this a go. Do we have a theme on what the Archetype will generally do, or is it still up for debate? Also where did you get the images for your cards, an anime character creating flash-game?

[quote="Saraak":2x2sbjt3]I might want to give this a go. Do we have a theme on what the Archetype will generally do, or is it still up for debate? Also where did you get the images for your cards, an anime character creating flash-game?[/quote:2x2sbjt3]
Tbh I'm thinking that you don't need to follow a ceritain theme. Your cards could be a Sea serpent or any effect you like. I'm just letting people to go wild of what they want to add to the Archetype.
But if you wanted to follow something to base upon, check the current card list and see if you can think of anything.
Btw the images is from a mobile game "Gacha Club'", also avalible on PC. But you can use any artwork you like.

I'd prefer if we kept to a consistent art pallete, but sure I guess it'll be fine if we all use whatever we want.

It might even end up as an archetype that tries make the other cards follow their own kind of playstyle. I'll try make a card later, after I eat dinner. It's nearly 10pm here and I've spent far too much of my time doing... unfortunate amounts of things.

Tbh by the response of 2 people (1 PM'ed me), I'm thinking of at least giving some kind of playstyle the player would create (like making beatdown deck, etc) since i fear the Project night died out from inconsistency. But since i haven't done anything like this before, i decided not to add restriction yet.

Here are my cards, enjoy!

Forumblitz Synchron https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2184281
If you control a "Forumblitz" monster, other than "Forumblitz Synchron," you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Summoned: You can add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck to your hand, then send the top card of your Deck to the GY. When this card is used as material for the Summon of a "Forumblitz" monster from your Extra Deck, draw 1 card. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Synchron" once per turn.

Forumblitz Highlander https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2184290
Pendulum Effect:
You cannot Pendulum Summon monsters, except Warrior monsters. This effect cannot be negated. Once per turn, if you do not have another "Forumblitz" monster in your other Pendulum Zone: you can add 1 "Forumblitz" Pendulum monster from your Deck to your hand.

Monster Effect:
"Forumblitz Synchron" + 1+ non-Tuner monsters
Must first be Synchro Summoned. Cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects. Non-Warrior monsters in your opponent's possession cannot activate their effects during the Battle Phase. If this card is Synchro Summoned: You can target 1 Warrior monster in your GY; Special Summon it, but its effects are negated, also inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the original ATK of the Summoned monster. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage. If this card is destroyed or Banished: You can destroy as many cards in your Pendulum Zones as possible (min. 1), and if you do, place this card in your Pendulum Zone.

[quote="parhelia_0000":320q0vdv]Here are my cards, enjoy![/quote:320q0vdv]
No hard feeling, eh? Good to see you contributing
Card Added to Cardlist.

[quote="KTeknis":26nl8zeg][quote="parhelia_0000":26nl8zeg]Here are my cards, enjoy![/quote:26nl8zeg]
No hard feeling, eh? Good to see you contributing
Card Added to Cardlist.[/quote:26nl8zeg]
But unbalance & small texts as always. Didn't he left the forum?

[quote="Rocket2":25w9hcb5]But unbalance & small texts as always. Didn't he left the forum?[/quote:25w9hcb5]
For now, I'm not taking balance into consideration.
Maybe if this project get quite an attention, I'll make another blitz archetype like this with a bit sensible restriction.

Saw this post and it seemed fun.

Also I decided to throw in a card type a lot of decks don't use!

Forumblitz - Tommy: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2185906
Spell
Equip
Can only be equipped to a "Forumblitz" monster. The equipped monster gains 800 ATK. (Quick Effect): You can destroy this card, target up to 2 cards your opponent controls; destroy them.

Forumblitz - Dual Wield: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2185914

Spell
Continuous
Once per turn if a "Forumblitz" Equip Spell is in the GY: You can banish 1 "Forumblitz" Equip Spell from your GY; Equip 2 Equip Spells to 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control. (1 from your hand and 1 from your Deck.) You can only use the effect of "Forumblitz - Dual Wield" once per turn.

I'm sure I worded the 2nd one a bit terribly, but you get the idea.

[quote="Renji Asuka":qpf2gsxl]Saw this post and it seemed fun.

Also I decided to throw in a card type a lot of decks don't use![/quote:qpf2gsxl]
Thanks! About time we got a spells. Although tbh I'm not expecting equips.
Card Added to Cardlist.

[quote="KTeknis":13khc64y][quote="Renji Asuka":13khc64y]Saw this post and it seemed fun.

Also I decided to throw in a card type a lot of decks don't use![/quote:13khc64y]
Thanks! About time we got a spells. Although tbh I'm not expecting equips.
Card Added to Cardlist.[/quote:13khc64y]
I can't help it ;-; I LOVE equip spells. Axe of Despair is my favorite Equip Spell of all time

Let me know if we're not getting enough activity, I'd be more than happy to contribute 2 more if there's not enough involvement.

To go with Forumblitz highlander:

Forumblitz Scout
Warrior / Pendulum / Effect
Level 4 / Scale 9
Attribute: WIND
Atk/Def: 1600/1600

Monster Effect:
If this card leaves the field: You can have your opponent pick 1 of these effects for you to apply.
● You can add to your hand or Special Summon 1 "Forumblitz" monster from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck.
● You can shuffle up to 5 cards from your field, GY, and/or face-up Extra Deck into the Deck, then draw 2 cards.
You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Scout" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you Summon this card, except Warrior monsters.

Pendulum Effect:
You can add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Scout" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except Warrior monsters. Once per turn, if a "Forumblitz" card(s) in your Pendulum Zone would be destroyed by monster effect, you can destroy 1 monster you control instead.

And here is a continuous spell card for the archetype I guess?

Forumblitz Attack
Continuous Spell

Effect:
During the turn you activate this card, you cannot Summon, except Warrior monsters. You can only use each of the following effects of "Forumblitz Attack" once per turn.
● If you control a Normal or Flip Summoned "Forumblitz" monster: You can target 1 card on the field, but if you control no Flip Summoned "Forumblitz" monsters, you can only target face-up cards with this effect; add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand, and if you do, destroy that target.
● If you control a "Forumblitz" monster that was Special Summoned from the hand and have a "Forumblitz" card in your Pendulum Zone: You can target 1 card on the field, but if you do not control a "Forumblitz" monster that was Pendulum Summoned from the hand, or you do not have 2 "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones, you can only target face-up cards with this effect; add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand, and if you do, destroy that target.
● If you control a "Forumblitz" monster that was Special Summoned from the Extra Deck: You can target 1 monster on the field, but if you do not have a "Forumblitz" card in your Pendulum Zone, you can only target your opponent's Attack Position monsters with this effect; add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand, and if you do, change that target's battle position.

[quote="KTeknis":3fpl3j4q]Inspired by FEUniverse's Void Blitzare Adventure, a project where every user contribute to design level, character, weapons, etc to make a Fire Emblem Romhack together, I wondered if I can do the same with DB Custom Card.

So ladies and gentleman, I present you my project: Forumblitz Archetype!

The Project is simple: Everyone create and submit their own "Forumblitz" card to add to the archetype in order to make it a fully fledged Archetype.
Here's some rules:
1. Everyone can only contribute 2 cards to the Archetype. However, if there's low attendance, I might allow user who had submitted before to submit 2 more, user who haven't submitted yet are unaffected and therefore still limited to 2 cards.
2. The cards must be public!
3. All skill are welcome! Whatever you're new, still learning, or is a pro in Custom Card, feel free to submit your card.
4. Support card that aren't part of "Forumblitz" card are okay, as long as it specifically support "Forumblitz" cards. For example “Gem-Knights” have “Absorb Fusion”, “Crystal Beasts” have “Rainbow Bridge“, etc.
5. (24/02/2021) There's not really a theme or restriction to follow here. Just add anything you like to the archetype. It's okay for it to go wild.
6. (24/02/2021) I'm not taking balance into consideration for now. Maybe if this project is a success, I will make a second blitz archetype where it will be considered.
7. I might add additional rule just in case.

I'll start by submitting my own 2 cards.
Forumblitz Rookie
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2183281
Forumblitz Field Commander
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2183273

Current Card List: https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7505254[/quote:3fpl3j4q]

Forumbllitz Rookie has some minor grammar/PSCT errors.

If you control no monster, or all monster you control are "Forumblitz" monster, It should be "monsters" not "monster. you can Special Summon this card from your hand. There should be parentheses surrounding "from your hand" here so players know this effect doesn't start a chain. Once per turn: You can target 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control that have a level; You don't need to say "that have a level". You can simply say target 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control; It's level become 4. It should be "its" not "It's". In yugioh, "its" almost never uses an apostrophe and is not capitalized unless you're starting a sentence with it or having it right after a colon.

Field Commander's effect says "Forumblitz monster you control gain 300 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to it." Is this referring to each material attached to that Field Commander itself, or is it referring to each material attached to each of those monsters?

[quote="Christen57":1yjtzqwu]To go with Forumblitz highlander:

Forumblitz Scout
Warrior / Pendulum / Effect
Level 4 / Scale 9
Attribute: WIND
Atk/Def: 1600/1600

Monster Effect:
If this card leaves the field: You can have your opponent pick 1 of these effects for you to apply.
● You can add to your hand or Special Summon 1 "Forumblitz" monster from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck.
● You can shuffle up to 5 cards from your field, GY, and/or face-up Extra Deck into the Deck, then draw 2 cards.
You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Scout" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you Summon this card, except Warrior monsters.

Pendulum Effect:
You can add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Scout" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except Warrior monsters. Once per turn, if a "Forumblitz" card(s) in your Pendulum Zone would be destroyed by monster effect, you can destroy 1 monster you control instead.

And here is a continuous spell card for the archetype I guess?

Forumblitz Attack
Continuous Spell

Effect:
During the turn you activate this card, you cannot Summon, except Warrior monsters. You can only use each of the following effects of "Forumblitz Attack" once per turn.
● If you control a Normal or Flip Summoned "Forumblitz" monster: You can target 1 card on the field, but if you control no Flip Summoned "Forumblitz" monsters, you can only target face-up cards with this effect; add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand, and if you do, destroy that target.
● If you control a "Forumblitz" monster that was Special Summoned from the hand and have a "Forumblitz" card in your Pendulum Zone: You can target 1 card on the field, but if you do not control a "Forumblitz" monster that was Pendulum Summoned from the hand, or you do not have 2 "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones, you can only target face-up cards with this effect; add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand, and if you do, destroy that target.
● If you control a "Forumblitz" monster that was Special Summoned from the Extra Deck: You can target 1 monster on the field, but if you do not have a "Forumblitz" card in your Pendulum Zone, you can only target your opponent's Attack Position monsters with this effect; add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand, and if you do, change that target's battle position.

[quote="KTeknis":1yjtzqwu]Inspired by FEUniverse's Void Blitzare Adventure, a project where every user contribute to design level, character, weapons, etc to make a Fire Emblem Romhack together, I wondered if I can do the same with DB Custom Card.

So ladies and gentleman, I present you my project: Forumblitz Archetype!

The Project is simple: Everyone create and submit their own "Forumblitz" card to add to the archetype in order to make it a fully fledged Archetype.
Here's some rules:
1. Everyone can only contribute 2 cards to the Archetype. However, if there's low attendance, I might allow user who had submitted before to submit 2 more, user who haven't submitted yet are unaffected and therefore still limited to 2 cards.
2. The cards must be public!
3. All skill are welcome! Whatever you're new, still learning, or is a pro in Custom Card, feel free to submit your card.
4. Support card that aren't part of "Forumblitz" card are okay, as long as it specifically support "Forumblitz" cards. For example “Gem-Knights” have “Absorb Fusion”, “Crystal Beasts” have “Rainbow Bridge“, etc.
5. (24/02/2021) There's not really a theme or restriction to follow here. Just add anything you like to the archetype. It's okay for it to go wild.
6. (24/02/2021) I'm not taking balance into consideration for now. Maybe if this project is a success, I will make a second blitz archetype where it will be considered.
7. I might add additional rule just in case.

I'll start by submitting my own 2 cards.
Forumblitz Rookie
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2183281
Forumblitz Field Commander
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2183273

Current Card List: https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7505254[/quote:1yjtzqwu]

Forumbllitz Rookie has some minor grammar/PSCT errors.

If you control no monster, or all monster you control are "Forumblitz" monster, It should be "monsters" not "monster. you can Special Summon this card from your hand. There should be parentheses surrounding "from your hand" here so players know this effect doesn't start a chain. Once per turn: You can target 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control that have a level; You don't need to say "that have a level". You can simply say target 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control; It's level become 4. It should be "its" not "It's". In yugioh, "its" almost never uses an apostrophe and is not capitalized unless you're starting a sentence with it or having it right after a colon.

Field Commander's effect says "Forumblitz monster you control gain 300 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to it." Is this referring to each material attached to that Field Commander itself, or is it referring to each material attached to each of those monsters?[/quote:1yjtzqwu]
Uhhh, I think KTeknis meant that you should create the card itself and make it public.

Thanks for the advice. Field Commander's effect is supposed to be monster attached to Field Commander itself.
[quote="Christen57":3ssnq7qz]To go with Forumblitz highlander:[/quote:3ssnq7qz]
[quote="parhelia_0000":3ssnq7qz]Uhhh, I think KTeknis meant that you should create the card itself and make it public.[/quote:3ssnq7qz]
Yes, I meant for Christen57 and everyone that want to participate to make the card yourself, then make it public.
Card Cannot be Added
Reason: Not exist yet.

[quote="KTeknis":17l3wlof]Thanks for the advice. Field Commander's effect is supposed to be monster attached to Field Commander itself.
[quote="Christen57":17l3wlof]To go with Forumblitz highlander:[/quote:17l3wlof]
[quote="parhelia_0000":17l3wlof]Uhhh, I think KTeknis meant that you should create the card itself and make it public.[/quote:17l3wlof]
Yes, I meant for Christen57 and everyone that want to participate to make the card yourself, then make it public.
Card Cannot be Added
Reason: Not exist yet.[/quote:17l3wlof]

I was thinking you could make it?

[quote="Christen57":2ii9pjjq]I was thinking you could make it?[/quote:2ii9pjjq]
I could, but I wanted the card to have your name in the bottom left of the corner. If I make it myself, then it will bear my name.
I always thinked it would be cool to have an archetype with different author displayed for each card on the bottom left corner.

[quote="KTeknis":354z6p86][quote="Christen57":354z6p86]I was thinking you could make it?[/quote:354z6p86]
I could, but I wanted the card to have your name in the bottom left of the corner. If I make it myself, then it will bear my name.
I always thinked it would be cool to have an archetype with different author displayed for each card on the bottom left corner.[/quote:354z6p86]

It would be better if you made it since you could edit it if you needed to if it turned out to be too strong or something.

My Submissions for this Archetype

Forumblitz Apprentice: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2186144
Art Source: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/73471107
Reasoning: I wanted the archetype to have some delayed combo potential. This Gemini monster is weak, and will likely be destroyed in the first turn without protection, but the pay of in doing so is Special Summoning a "Forumblitz" from the Deck. You can use this to SS Synchron and go off into either Link or Synchro plays. (And maybe Xyz if someone else makes a Level 3 for the Archetype).

Forumblitx Professor: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2186190
Art Source: https://www.pinterest.ph/pin/586945763920025780/
Reasoning: This is the protection I wanted for the Gemini card, a Union card. This card would protect a Forumblitz monster from being selected as an attack target to try to stall out for a turn, but can still be destroyed by Card Effects. In addition, this card can be used to go into Rank 4 plays with other Forumblitz monsters.

[quote="Christen57":2m86pirm]It would be better if you made it since you could edit it if you needed to if it turned out to be too strong or something.[/quote:2m86pirm]
Fine, I guess.
Card Revised and Inserted
Modification:
- Actually making them exist.
- Forumblitz Attack: Third Effect Removed due to effect's length preventing upload.

[quote="Saraak":2keal9aq]My Submissions for this Archetype[/quote:2keal9aq]
I can't find your card when I tried to search them. Have you made them public?
Also one thing: I can forcibly add your card into the cardlist if I should.

[quote="KTeknis":1jg3p5iv][quote="Saraak":1jg3p5iv]My Submissions for this Archetype[/quote:1jg3p5iv]
I can't find your card when I tried to search them. Have you made them public?
Also one thing: I can forcibly add your card into the cardlist if I should.[/quote:1jg3p5iv]
Oh damn, wait they aren't public by default? My bad. How do I make them public?

EDIT: I'm a dumbass. I changed the 'Available to' from 'Myself' to 'Everyone.'
It should be freely available now.

[quote="Saraak":2hr8cjf1]Oh damn, wait they aren't public by default? My bad. How do I make them public?

EDIT: I'm a dumbass. I changed the 'Available to' from 'Myself' to 'Everyone.'
It should be freely available now.[/quote:2hr8cjf1]
That's more like it. Also there's no "Forumblitz Apprentice", but "Forumblitz Archiver".
Regardless:
Card Added to the Cardlist

[quote="KTeknis":2dsy90oc]
That's more like it. Also there's no "Forumblitz Apprentice", but "Forumblitz Archiver".
Regardless:
Card Added to the Cardlist[/quote:2dsy90oc]

Oops, I'll be renaming it. It's more thematic if it's Master and Apprentice imo

It's up to you. It's still your card.
Also why the heck this thread is tagged "On Fire"? Aside from Rocket2's word to Parhelia, It's been quite chill.

Ty fam.
[quote="KTeknis":1wqdj7ja]Also why the heck this thread is tagged "On Fire"? Aside from Rocket2's word to Parhelia, It's been quite chill.[/quote:1wqdj7ja]

No idea. Someone might've preemptively marked it in preparation for possible altercations.

[quote="KTeknis":351kl0gr]Inspired by FEUniverse's Void Blitzare Adventure, a project where every user contribute to design level, character, weapons, etc to make a Fire Emblem Romhack together, I wondered if I can do the same with DB Custom Card.

So ladies and gentleman, I present you my project: Forumblitz Archetype!

The Project is simple: Everyone create and submit their own "Forumblitz" card to add to the archetype in order to make it a fully fledged Archetype.
Here's some rules:
1. Everyone can only contribute 2 cards to the Archetype. However, if there's low attendance, I might allow user who had submitted before to submit 2 more, user who haven't submitted yet are unaffected and therefore still limited to 2 cards.
2. The cards must be public!
3. All skill are welcome! Whatever you're new, still learning, or is a pro in Custom Card, feel free to submit your card.
4. Support card that aren't part of "Forumblitz" card are okay, as long as it specifically support "Forumblitz" cards. For example “Gem-Knights” have “Absorb Fusion”, “Crystal Beasts” have “Rainbow Bridge“, etc.
5. (24/02/2021) There's not really a theme or restriction to follow here. Just add anything you like to the archetype. It's okay for it to go wild.
6. (24/02/2021) I'm not taking balance into consideration for now. Maybe if this project is a success, I will make a second blitz archetype where it will be considered.
7. I might add additional rule just in case.

I'll start by submitting my own 2 cards.
Forumblitz Rookie
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2183281
Forumblitz Field Commander
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2183273

Current Card List: https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7505254[/quote:351kl0gr]

Oh I thought the Forumblitz would be a warrior-only archetype, but now it looks like spellcasters were added, so could you remove the "you cannot summon except warriors" clauses from Forumblitz Scout and Forumblitz Attack so they could work with spellcasters too?

Also you forgot to add the third effect to Forumblitz Attack:

If you control a "Forumblitz" monster that was Special Summoned from the Extra Deck: You can target 1 monster on the field, but if you do not have a "Forumblitz" card in your Pendulum Zone, you can only target your opponent's Attack Position monsters with this effect; add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand, and if you do, change that target's battle position.

If the effect becomes too long then try removing "your opponent's" and have it just be "target Attack Position monsters". Also replace 'do not have a "Forumblitz" card in your Pendulum Zone' with 'control no "Forumblitz" Pendulum Monsters' to save space.

Since there's not much attendance in new card submissions, I thought I'd kick it back into action with 2 more cards. Enjoy.

Forumblitz Gunner https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2190397
Pendulum Effect:
You cannot Pendulum Summon monsters, except Warrior monsters. This effect cannot be negated. Once per turn, you can reduce any battle damage from battles involving a "Forumblitz" monster you control to 0, and if you do, draw 1 card. "Forumblitz" monsters you control cannot be Tributed, except for a Tribute Summon.

Monster Effect:
If this card is Pendulum Summoned: You can target as many cards you control (min. 1); destroy them, and if you do, add "Forumblitz" monsters with different names from your Deck to your hand, except "Forumblitz Gunner", equal to the number of cards destroyed. You can target 1 "Forumblitz" monster in your GY; banish it, and if you do, Special Summon 1 "Forumblitz" monster from your Deck with a different name as the monster that was banished. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Gunner" once per turn.

Forumblitz Admiral https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2190399
"Forumblitz Synchron" + 1 "Forumblitz" Pendulum monster + 1 Warrior or Spellcaster monster
Must be either Fusion Summoned, or Special Summoned by sending the above monsters you control to the GY (in which case you do not use "Polymerization"). Cannot be destroyed by battle or by your opponent's card effects. You never take damage if the amount is less than or equal to this card's ATK. If a "Forumblitz" monster you control attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. When this card inflicts battle damage to the opponent: You can target 1 "Forumblitz" Spell or Trap card in your GY; either add it to your hand or Set it to your side of the field. That set card can be activated this turn. When this card leaves the field: Special Summon 1 "Forumblitz" monster from your Deck, but it cannot attack directly this turn.

[quote="parhelia_0000":1i7v1k0t]Since there's not much attendance in new card submissions, I thought I'd kick it back into action with 2 more cards. Enjoy.[/quote:1i7v1k0t]
I think I should've specify when I allow second card adding. At least wait until I allow it.
I'm not adding your card yet, but I think it's time to set a deadline: By tomorrow Saturday, when I check it, if there's no new user submitting, I'll allow other's who had posted to post 2 cards again, except for you, instead these 2 cards will be added properly to the cardlist.

[quote="KTeknis":2ecmjq83][quote="parhelia_0000":2ecmjq83]Since there's not much attendance in new card submissions, I thought I'd kick it back into action with 2 more cards. Enjoy.[/quote:2ecmjq83]
I think I should've specify when I allow second card adding. At least wait until I allow it.
I'm not adding your card yet, but I think it's time to set a deadline: By tomorrow Saturday, when I check it, if there's no new user submitting, I'll allow other's who had posted to post 2 cards again, except for you, instead these 2 cards will be added properly to the cardlist.[/quote:2ecmjq83]
You should probably advertise this thread on the Main Menu if you haven't already.

[quote="Renji Asuka":1eoddvkr]You should probably advertise this thread on the Main Menu if you haven't already.[/quote:1eoddvkr]
I probably could, but I think people at the Main Menu is quite hostile to Custom Card makers.

Ooh, this looks fun. I know this might not fit the archetype, but here's mine. It might a little too generic and strong, so I apologize in advance! This artwork is drawn by Kjus.

https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2190680

[quote="KTeknis":3t34n3ye][quote="Renji Asuka":3t34n3ye]You should probably advertise this thread on the Main Menu if you haven't already.[/quote:3t34n3ye]
I probably could, but I think people at the Main Menu is quite hostile to Custom Card makers.[/quote:3t34n3ye]
Main Menu itself is a mistake

[quote="ShinRyu9":2c0dj15q]Ooh, this looks fun. I know this might not fit the archetype, but here's mine. It might a little too generic and strong, so I apologize in advance! This artwork is drawn by Kjus.

https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2190680[/quote:2c0dj15q]
The maximum number of card you can submit is 2, so you can upload a second one if you wanted.
Card Added to the Decklist
Since we got another submission, the deadline is extended to Sunday, 28 February 2021. Sorry Parhelia.

Also for Christen57's card, a lot of them are finally edited, but I had to butcher "Forumblitz Attack"'s effect because my God it's sooo long.

Deadline has now passed, please add my two additional cards to the card list.

[quote="parhelia_0000":2r8se2el]Deadline has now passed, please add my two additional cards to the card list.[/quote:2r8se2el]
Oh, yeah, forgotten, also a bit busy with collage before.

For Renji Asuka, Christen57, and Saraak:You can post 2 more cards to the cardlist. . For ShinRyu: You can post three since you only posted 1 before.
As for Parhelia_0000: Forumblitz Gunner and Forumblitz Admiral has been added to the Decklist

[quote="KTeknis":21de4fzs][quote="parhelia_0000":21de4fzs]Deadline has now passed, please add my two additional cards to the card list.[/quote:21de4fzs]
Oh, yeah, forgotten, also a bit busy with collage before.

For Renji Asuka, Christen57, and Saraak:You can post 2 more cards to the cardlist. . For ShinRyu: You can post three since you only posted 1 before.
As for Parhelia_0000: Forumblitz Gunner and Forumblitz Admiral has been added to the Decklist[/quote:21de4fzs]

Well for starters, for Forumblitz Attack, replace "target 1 monster in Attack Position your opponent control;" with "target 1 Attack Position monster your opponent controls;" since it uses up a few less characters and is worded better.

Second, because of the way the Forumblitz Fusion Monster is worded (requires you to send a pendulum monster you control to the graveyard as 1 of the fusion materials) it can't summon itself that way since you wouldn't be able to pay that cost due to pendulums going to the extra deck instead of the graveyard, so it should be worded so it tributes the materials you control instead of simply sending them.

Speaking of the fusion monster, here are 2 more normal spells to go with it:

Forumblitz Admiration
Fusion Summon 1 "Forumblitz Admiral" from your Extra Deck, using monsters from your hand or field as material. If only your opponent controls a monster, you can also use up to 1 "Forumblitz" Pendulum Monster Card each in your Pendulum Zone and face-up Extra Deck. You can only activate 1 "Forumblitz Admiration" per turn.

Forumblitz Retreat
Target up to 5 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are on your field, GY, and/or that are banished; shuffle them into the Deck, then you can draw cards equal to the number of monster card types you targeted with this effect (Normal, Fusion, Synchro, Xyz, and Link). You can shuffle this card from your GY and 1 face-up "Forumblitz" Pendulum Monster from your Extra Deck into the Deck; negate the effects of all face-up cards currently on the field until the end of this turn. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Retreat" once per turn.

[quote="Christen57":1sc6kkx4]Well for starters, for Forumblitz Attack, replace "target 1 monster in Attack Position your opponent control;" with "target 1 Attack Position monster your opponent controls;" since it uses up a few less characters and is worded better.

Second, because of the way the Forumblitz Fusion Monster is worded (requires you to send a pendulum monster you control to the graveyard as 1 of the fusion materials) it can't summon itself that way since you wouldn't be able to pay that cost due to pendulums going to the extra deck instead of the graveyard, so it should be worded so it tributes the materials you control instead of simply sending them.

Speaking of the fusion monster, here are 2 more normal spells to go with it:
[/quote:1sc6kkx4]
Sorry I was overwhelmed by the collage tasks.
The Fusion Monster are unfortunately Parhelia's, so not much can be done about it unless he willing to cooperate.
Also one complain about me having to make the card myself is that I had to provide the artwork myself.
Maybe I could make a second blitz like this in which the user only post the card detail (and artwork, either optional or mandatory) instead of making the card itself to allow me to edit it myself, but I kinda pessimistic about it.

Card Created and Added to the Cardlist

Since I extended the limit for those already posted, I guess I should make 2 more myself someday.

[quote="parhelia_0000":1lfwx7rf]Deadline has now passed, please add my two additional cards to the card list.[/quote:1lfwx7rf]

Because of the way your Forumblitz Fusion Monster is worded (requires you to send a pendulum monster you control to the graveyard as 1 of the fusion materials) it actually can't summon itself that way since you wouldn't be able to pay that cost due to pendulums on the field going to the extra deck instead of the graveyard, so it should be worded so it tributes the materials you control instead of simply "sending" them.

[quote="Christen57":nfasbt31][quote="parhelia_0000":nfasbt31]Deadline has now passed, please add my two additional cards to the card list.[/quote:nfasbt31]

Because of the way your Forumblitz Fusion Monster is worded (requires you to send a pendulum monster you control to the graveyard as 1 of the fusion materials) it actually can't summon itself that way since you wouldn't be able to pay that cost due to pendulums on the field going to the extra deck instead of the graveyard, so it should be worded so it tributes the materials you control instead of simply "sending" them.[/quote:nfasbt31]
Errata is done, I won't bother posting the reworded effect here. Check the card link if you want to have a look.

[quote="james123":1ac96f6c]https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2204546
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2204544[/quote:1ac96f6c]
Welp, we got all 6 Summon Mechanic now. Pretty neat.

Card Added to the Cardlist

Well, since I extended the limit for those who has uploaded, I decided to Upload 2 more cards myself:

Forumblitz Blight Commander
I think I just made my first "Parhelia Tier" card.
[url:214lkttx]https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2205476[/url:214lkttx]

Forumblitz Monitoring
We got all type of Summoning Method here (Except Tribute Summon), might as well make it a D/D/D Clone.
[url:214lkttx]https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2205509[/url:214lkttx]

[quote="james123":2z4ddhht]https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2206439[/quote:2z4ddhht]
I only extended the limit to those who had posted their card before last Sunday, so sorry. You're still limited to 2 cards.
However I think I'll set another deadline. If by tomorrow Sunday there's no new submission, your "Corps" will be added to the list, and you can add 1 more card.

EDIT: Sunday.

At some point, once you have enough cards to make a full deck, you should do a playtest and see how it performs, and provide your overall feedback on the deck afterwards. Would be interesting to see how this deck comes out in the end.

[quote="KTeknis":3t9lgqtu][quote="parhelia_0000":3t9lgqtu]Deadline has now passed, please add my two additional cards to the card list.[/quote:3t9lgqtu]
Oh, yeah, forgotten, also a bit busy with collage before.

For Renji Asuka, Christen57, and Saraak:You can post 2 more cards to the cardlist. . For ShinRyu: You can post three since you only posted 1 before.
As for Parhelia_0000: Forumblitz Gunner and Forumblitz Admiral has been added to the Decklist[/quote:3t9lgqtu]

Alrighty, before I read further into the threatd, I'll post what I made.

Forumblitz Researcher: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2207266
Art Source: https://www.zerochan.net/2893037
Reasoning: I felt that the two I added earlier wouldn't be able to be used, so I gave a reason to use them.

Forumblitz Barricade: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2207276
Art Source: https://www.deviantart.com/kianchai/art ... 8732&qo=27
Reasoning: The Archetype looked like it didn't have any traps for defensive utility, so I added some.

[quote="Saraak":1hwoobgt]
Alrighty, before I read further into the threatd, I'll post what I made.[/quote:1hwoobgt]
Ladies and gentleman: Our first Trap Card.

Card Added to the Cardlist

Also this is kinda sudden, but I decided to add James123's Forumblitz Corps to the cardlist and allow him to add 1 more card. I felt that since we got more than 20 cards, it quite enough.

I think there's enough here for a 40 card deck (with some cards only having 1 or 2 copies), but not too sure how it'd perform.

[quote="Saraak":642m9s9o]I think there's enough here for a 40 card deck (with some cards only having 1 or 2 copies), but not too sure how it'd perform.[/quote:642m9s9o]

Your Forumblitz Trap has major spelling, grammar, and PSCT errors:

When your opponent declares an attack, and you "Forumblitz" monsters in a Penzulum Zone (min. 1), you can activate this card. Negate the attack, and if you do, Special Summon "Forumblitz" monsters from your GY equal to the number of "Forumblitz" monsters in your Pendulum Zones.

Should instead be:

When your opponent declares an attack while you have a "Forumblitz" card in your Pendulum Zone: Negate the attack, and if you do, Special Summon "Forumblitz" monsters from your GY equal to the number of "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones.

[quote="james123":1l6g59in]https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2206439[/quote:1l6g59in]

Your Forumblitz Ritual Monster has some PSCT errors, most notably that it doesn't specify that the card(s) shuffled into the Deck.

You can Ritual Summon this card with "Forumblitz Drop-Off". When this card is Ritual Summoned, you can Shuffle 1 face-up card your opponent controls. If this card was Ritual Summoned using "Forumblitz Synchron", you can shuffle up to 2 instead. If you control another "Forumblitz" monster, this card cannot be targeted for attacks. Also, it can attack your opponent directly, but any battle damage it inflicts is halved if it does so using this effect.

Should instead be:

You can Ritual Summon this card with "Forumblitz Drop-Off". If this card is Ritual Summoned: You can shuffle 1 face-up card your opponent controls into the Deck, or up to 2 instead if this card was Ritual Summoned using "Forumblitz Synchron". While you control another "Forumblitz" monster, this card cannot be targeted for attacks, also it can attack directly, but when it does so using this effect, the battle damage inflicted to your opponent is halved.

[quote="KTeknis":1tvaprrn][quote="Saraak":1tvaprrn]
Alrighty, before I read further into the threatd, I'll post what I made.[/quote:1tvaprrn]
Ladies and gentleman: Our first Trap Card.

Card Added to the Cardlist

Also this is kinda sudden, but I decided to add James123's Forumblitz Corps to the cardlist and allow him to add 1 more card. I felt that since we got more than 20 cards, it quite enough.[/quote:1tvaprrn]

As long as we have at least 14 main deck cards, it will be enough.

Also, can you change the part of Forumblitz's Admiration's effect that says "If only your opponent controls a monster" to "If your opponent controls more monsters than you do"?

Due to the onging flame war between Rocket2 and Parhelia_0000, I decided to evacuate from the forum. (I still hanging in DB, just staying away from the Forum) However, I will still visit this thread and continue the Forumblitz Project. Also, I will no longer extend the card limit for other user

Also if the flame war manages to spread to this thread, I will abandon this project.

[quote="Christen57":a5uly1ck]Also, can you change the part of Forumblitz's Admiration's effect that says "If only your opponent controls a monster" to "If your opponent controls more monsters than you do"?[/quote:a5uly1ck]
Done.

[quote="KTeknis":3lmrejb6][quote="Christen57":3lmrejb6]Also, can you change the part of Forumblitz's Admiration's effect that says "If only your opponent controls a monster" to "If your opponent controls more monsters than you do"?[/quote:3lmrejb6]
Done.[/quote:3lmrejb6]

Also, since a Ritual was added to this archetype, can you change forumblitz retreat's effect so it says:

Target any number of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are on your field, GY, and/or that are banished; shuffle them into the Deck, then you can draw cards equal to the number of different monster card types you targeted with this effect (Normal, Ritual, Fusion, Synchro, Xyz, and Link). You can shuffle this card from your GY and 1 face-up "Forumblitz" Pendulum Monster from your Extra Deck into the Deck; negate the effects of all face-up cards currently on the field until the end of this turn. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Retreat" once per turn.

[quote="Christen57":34vtvrs8][quote="KTeknis":34vtvrs8][quote="Christen57":34vtvrs8]Also, can you change the part of Forumblitz's Admiration's effect that says "If only your opponent controls a monster" to "If your opponent controls more monsters than you do"?[/quote:34vtvrs8]
Done.[/quote:34vtvrs8]

Also, since a Ritual was added to this archetype, can you change forumblitz retreat's effect so it says:

Target any number of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are on your field, GY, and/or that are banished; shuffle them into the Deck, then you can draw cards equal to the number of different monster card types you targeted with this effect (Normal, Ritual, Fusion, Synchro, Xyz, and Link). You can shuffle this card from your GY and 1 face-up "Forumblitz" Pendulum Monster from your Extra Deck into the Deck; negate the effects of all face-up cards currently on the field until the end of this turn. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Retreat" once per turn.[/quote:34vtvrs8]
Also done.

[quote="Christen57":1w9tyl7t] Your Forumblitz Trap has major spelling, grammar, and PSCT errors: [/quote:1w9tyl7t]
Fixed now, ty.

Welp, at least 1 card I made ended up being a usable staple (Professor), and that's good enough for me.

You're right that the Researcher doesn't really do much even with the full benefits. I can probably buff it, but then that'd be outdating this high-effort post, which is kinda sucky imo. However, if I did buff it, I'd at least give it an omni-negate when summoned with the Gemini w/ the cost of banishing from the GY 1 archetype card, and make the eff when summoned by the Union a once per turn protection eff for any archetype card.

Sad to see Apprentice get yeeted into bottom-tier though, I liked that one. I kinda hoped people would make some level 7 synchros, but none ever arose. Also, you're right that it's way too slow for the type of deck this ended up becoming, so if I had to buff it, probably remove the banish effect and make it a banish from GY to SS from the Deck instead of once per turn, balanced by the fact its a Gemini monster and getting it out w/ its effect is incredibly hard (except with cards like Supervise). Oh, and make it level 4.

Big oof to the trap. No idea how to buff it, other than allowing it to be used from the hand if you control no monsters (and removing the when attacked requirement).

Hindsight is usually never 20/20, but I'm glad to see the archetype looks good to use.

So somehow Blight Commander got into lower tier, despite my attempt to make it on par with Highlander, I think I instead made the deck equivalent of Utopia Double. Tbh I think it's fine for it to sit there, I'll just make it Pendulum Summonable just for the sake of it.
Also, One idea about the field spell is that It gain effect depending of what you control instead of activating one on summoning.
Other than that, I think I'm happy that at least 1 sit on higher tier, while the other is on the mid.

Anyway, I forgot to tell, I heard from Rocket2 that the conflict has ended for now. For that I no longer under "Evacuation Mode". Still no card limit extending for now though, sorry.

[quote="KTeknis":21ikqpna]So somehow Blight Commander got into lower tier, despite my attempt to make it on par with Highlander, I think I instead made the deck equivalent of Utopia Double. Tbh I think it's fine for it to sit there, I'll just make it Pendulum Summonable just for the sake of it.
Also, One idea about the field spell is that It gain effect depending of what you control instead of activating one on summoning.
Other than that, I think I'm happy that at least 1 sit on higher tier, while the other is on the mid.[/quote:21ikqpna]

I wanted to put it to at least mid tier, but it's summoning requirements were just too strict for that. To get this out, you need to either use 2 materials for forumblitz field commander, then use at least 2 more materials for any of the other ritual, synchro, or link monsters, meaning you use up 4 materials to bring this out, or use a total of 4 level 4 materials for this.

Number 39 Utopia on the other hand, can be made entirely with just 2 materials, which you can then evolve into Utopia Ray, which you can then evolve into Utopia The Lightning, so for 2 turns you can boost it's ATK to 5000. Utopia Double can also be made with just 2 materials.

I would change it's monster effect to something like this:

3 Level 4 "Forumblitz" monsters
If you control a face-up "Forumblitz" Normal, Ritual, Fusion, Synchro, or Link monster, You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a "Forumblitz Field Commander" you control as material. (Transfer its materials to this card.) If you can Pendulum Summon Level 4, you can Pendulum Summon this face-up card in your Extra Deck. Unaffected by your opponent's activated effects that do not target it. You can detach 1 material from this card, then target 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control; it gains 2000 ATK until the next End Phase. If this card leaves the field: You can destroy up to 2 cards you control, and if you do, you can place this card in your Pendulum Zone. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Blight Commander" once per turn.

That way it can be brought out with less level 4 materials, it can also summon itself it's alternate way if there's a forumblitz normal monster, allowing you to make better use of the forumblitz gemini monster and the forumblitz token, it can actually be pendulum summoned if you can pendulum summon the same level, it's immunity is worded better instead of "Unaffected by your activated opponent's card effects that do not target or destroy them" which could be interpreted as the opponent having to use cards/effects that target/destroy themselves to affect this card, it's ATK boosting effect is changed to simply 2000 ATK instead of "the detached material's ATK" so even if a spell/trap becomes a material for this card (like Overlay Regen) it would still work, it's other effect is buffed so it puts itself in the pendulum zone no matter how it leaves the field and so it can destroy up to 2 cards instead of having to destroy "as many as possible" to put it in the pendulum zone, but also nerfed so it's effects are hard once per turn meaning you can't keep destroying it over and over to replace it in your pendulum zone infinitely.

Also I would change it's pendulum effect to this:

You cannot Pendulum Summon, except "Forumblitz" monsters. This effect cannot be negated. You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" cards that is in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, or that is banished to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Blight Commander" once per turn.

So that way it can also pendulum summon the forumblitz monsters that aren't warrior and can also search cards from places other than the graveyard.

[quote="Saraak":2qhk0gxq]Welp, at least 1 card I made ended up being a usable staple (Professor), and that's good enough for me.

You're right that the Researcher doesn't really do much even with the full benefits. I can probably buff it, but then that'd be outdating this high-effort post, which is kinda sucky imo. However, if I did buff it, I'd at least give it an omni-negate when summoned with the Gemini w/ the cost of banishing from the GY 1 archetype card, and make the eff when summoned by the Union a once per turn protection eff for any archetype card.

Sad to see Apprentice get yeeted into bottom-tier though, I liked that one. I kinda hoped people would make some level 7 synchros, but none ever arose. Also, you're right that it's way too slow for the type of deck this ended up becoming, so if I had to buff it, probably remove the banish effect and make it a banish from GY to SS from the Deck instead of once per turn, balanced by the fact its a Gemini monster and getting it out w/ its effect is incredibly hard (except with cards like Supervise). Oh, and make it level 4.

Big oof to the trap. No idea how to buff it, other than allowing it to be used from the hand if you control no monsters (and removing the when attacked requirement).

Hindsight is usually never 20/20, but I'm glad to see the archetype looks good to use.[/quote:2qhk0gxq]

I would change researcher's effect to this:

When an attack is declared involving this Link Summoned card: You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" Spells/Traps that is in your Deck, GY, or that is banished to your hand. If this card leaves the field: You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that is in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, or that is banished to your hand. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Researcher" once per turn.

I would make the gemini a level 4 and change it's effect to this:

This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the GY. While this card is a Normal Monster on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect:
● (Quick Effect): You can Special Summon 2 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or that are banished, but their effects are negated. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Apprentice" once per turn.

I would change the trap's effect to this:

During the Battle or End Phase: Special Summon a number of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or that are banished equal to the number of "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones, but they cannot attack this turn. If you have 3 or more cards in your hand, you can activate this card the turn it was Set. You can only activate 1 "Forumblitz Barricade" per turn.

Alright, I changed Blight's Monster effect , but for the Pendulum effect, I only made it returning from GY or Face-up Extra Deck, since we already got Highlander and 4 other MD card for Deck Search.

So I see that my card is bottom tier. Valid, btw. I knew I wanted "Forumblitz Archer" a little generic, and giving it generic protection effects too. Then Christen mentioned Gemini monsters, and I completely forgot about that too.

I tried buffing it by giving it Down-Right, Down, and Down-Left Link Arrows. I was originally going to do that, but I was little hesitant that might be too strong. But now that you mentioned other Monsters that could do better than it, I knew I had to change that statement entirely.

Summoning conditions are changed too, but perhaps I might make it just "Forumblitz" monsters instead of different names. I haven't changed the passive effects. If it's too generic (which is it) or too strong, I'll change it right away. Feedbacks and/or suggestions are always welcome for my card.

[quote="KTeknis":1th3c43k][quote="parhelia_0000":1th3c43k]Deadline has now passed, please add my two additional cards to the card list.[/quote:1th3c43k]
Oh, yeah, forgotten, also a bit busy with collage before.

For Renji Asuka, Christen57, and Saraak:You can post 2 more cards to the cardlist. . For ShinRyu: You can post three since you only posted 1 before.
As for Parhelia_0000: Forumblitz Gunner and Forumblitz Admiral has been added to the Decklist[/quote:1th3c43k]

I'm going to keep my only 1 card. I might make a second one, but I'm not too familiar of what "Forumblitz" really does to think of a second or even a third card. Plus, it's much easier for me to manage what I can and can't fix with my only 1 card.

[quote="Christen57":2m0khj7i] I would change researcher's effect to this:

When an attack is declared involving this Link Summoned card: You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" Spells/Traps that is in your Deck, GY, or that is banished to your hand. If this card leaves the field: You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that is in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, or that is banished to your hand. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Researcher" once per turn.[/quote:2m0khj7i]
Not a bad idea, but I still want it to be able to have a special eff when summoned using the Union/Gemini monsters, so I've changed it. The first effect you mentioned is added, except I added a clause where if the added card was an equip spell, it could equip itself to Researcher. I've removed the previous Union/Gemini effects and changed it into this: "If your opponent activates a card, and this card was Link Summoned using a Gemini monster (Quick Effect): negate the activation, then if you also used a Union monster to Link Summon this card, add 1 "Forumbliz" monster from your Deck, GY, or face-up in your Extra Deck to your hand"

[quote="Christen57":2m0khj7i] I would make the gemini a level 4 and change it's effect to this:

This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the GY. While this card is a Normal Monster on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect:
● (Quick Effect): You can Special Summon 2 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or that are banished, but their effects are negated. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Apprentice" once per turn.[/quote:2m0khj7i]
Yeah, that's reasonable. No issue with changing it into that.

[quote="Christen57":2m0khj7i] I would change the trap's effect to this:

During the Battle or End Phase: Special Summon a number of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or that are banished equal to the number of "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones, but they cannot attack this turn. If you have 3 or more cards in your hand, you can activate this card the turn it was Set. You can only activate 1 "Forumblitz Barricade" per turn.[/quote:2m0khj7i]
Yeah, that's fair. Although, I'm almost certain that this archetype is 90% busted and a Tier-1 deck purely because of how consistent it is. Some of these cards need to lock the player out of summoning outside of their archetype. I can easily imagine these cards being used as an engine in other decks to bring out powerful Rank 4 Xyz and Level 8 Synchro monsters. With that in mind, I'm adding an archetype summoning limit to the Trap card. That's just my opinion, though, and probably unneeded, but I can't help but be wary.

[quote="Saraak":3cy4if46][quote="Christen57":3cy4if46] I would change researcher's effect to this:

When an attack is declared involving this Link Summoned card: You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" Spells/Traps that is in your Deck, GY, or that is banished to your hand. If this card leaves the field: You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that is in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, or that is banished to your hand. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Researcher" once per turn.[/quote:3cy4if46]
Not a bad idea, but I still want it to be able to have a special eff when summoned using the Union/Gemini monsters, so I've changed it. The first effect you mentioned is added, except I added a clause where if the added card was an equip spell, it could equip itself to Researcher. I've removed the previous Union/Gemini effects and changed it into this: "If your opponent activates a card, and this card was Link Summoned using a Gemini monster (Quick Effect): negate the activation, then if you also used a Union monster to Link Summon this card, add 1 "Forumbliz" monster from your Deck, GY, or face-up in your Extra Deck to your hand"

[quote="Christen57":3cy4if46] I would make the gemini a level 4 and change it's effect to this:

This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the GY. While this card is a Normal Monster on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect:
● (Quick Effect): You can Special Summon 2 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or that are banished, but their effects are negated. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Apprentice" once per turn.[/quote:3cy4if46]
Yeah, that's reasonable. No issue with changing it into that.

[quote="Christen57":3cy4if46] I would change the trap's effect to this:

During the Battle or End Phase: Special Summon a number of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or that are banished equal to the number of "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones, but they cannot attack this turn. If you have 3 or more cards in your hand, you can activate this card the turn it was Set. You can only activate 1 "Forumblitz Barricade" per turn.[/quote:3cy4if46]
Yeah, that's fair. Although, I'm almost certain that this archetype is 90% busted and a Tier-1 deck purely because of how consistent it is. Some of these cards need to lock the player out of summoning outside of their archetype. I can easily imagine these cards being used as an engine in other decks to bring out powerful Rank 4 Xyz and Level 8 Synchro monsters. With that in mind, I'm adding an archetype summoning limit to the Trap card. That's just my opinion, though, and probably unneeded, but I can't help but be wary.[/quote:3cy4if46]

That's fine, although there are still some minor grammar and PSCT errors with those changes, and other things can be changed to make your effects shorter and easier to read.

For Forumblitz Apprentice, there should be a space between the bullet point and (Quick Effect). Right now it's
●(Quick Effect)
when it should be
● (Quick Effect)
Also, after "● (Quick Effect):" it should say "You can Special Summon" not just "Special Summon".

For the trap, it should say
'Special Summon a number of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your hand, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or banished equal to the number of "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones'
not
'Special Summon "Forumblitz" monsters from your hand, GY, or face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or banished equal to the number of "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones'.

When specifying multiple possible locations you can special summon from, you don't include "or" or "and/or" more than once in that sentence. In other words, you don't say "Special Summon from location x, or location y, and/or location z". You just say "Special Summon from location x, location y, or location z," or if you're bringing out multiple monsters, you say "and/or location z".

Also, you can change
'You cannot Special Summon monsters the turn you activate this card, except for "Forumblitz" monsters'
to
'You cannot Summon the turn you activate this card, except "Forumblitz" monsters'.
It's shorter, easier to read, and uses up less characters.

Also, the "If you have 3 or more cards in your hand" part should come before the "You cannot Summon" part so that too makes the card easier to read.

For the link monster, where it says "from your Deck or GY to your hand; and if it was an Equip Spell," there should be a comma between "hand" and "and," not a semi colon. Also, instead of "and if it was an Equip Spell" you can say "and if it is an Equip Spell" so it takes less characters and makes it shorter and easier to read.

The effect that triggers "If your opponent activates a card" should specify if it's "If your opponent activates a card or effect" or just "If your opponent activates a Spell/Trap Card, or monster effect," or something like that so there isn't any confusion. Also, the word "negate" in "(Quick Effect): negate the activation" should be capitalized since it's coming right after a colon.

I agree that some of the forumblitz cards should limit you to only being able to summon forumblitz monsters so they aren't too overpowered. I might ask for my forumblitz scout to have the same kind of restriction. I only didn't because I thought people would try to mix this with monsters that were not forumblitz monsters.

[quote="KTeknis":3ok5d0wh]Alright, I changed Blight's Monster effect , but for the Pendulum effect, I only made it returning from GY or Face-up Extra Deck, since we already got Highlander and 4 other MD card for Deck Search.[/quote:3ok5d0wh]

You should change it's pendulum effect from
'You can target 1 "Forumblitz" cards that is in your GY or face-up in your Extra Deck; return it to your hand'
to
'You can add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your GY or face-up Extra Deck to your hand'
so it's easier to read and uses less characters.

Also, effects never "target" cards located in the hand, deck, or extra deck. Only on the field, graveyard, and banished cards.

Also, I made a mistake with it's monster effect. Where it says "You can also Xyz Summon," that "You" should be lower case since you're not starting a sentence with it or having it right after a colon.

Also can you change forumblitz's scout's defense to 0 and it's monster effect to this:

If this card leaves the field: You can have your opponent pick 1 of these effects for you to apply.
● You can add to your hand or Special Summon 1 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that is in your Deck, GY, banished, or face-up Extra Deck.
● Shuffle any number of your "Forumblitz" cards that are on your field, GY, banished, and/or face-up Extra Deck into the Deck, then draw 3 cards.
You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Scout" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

That way it's still strong but can't be splashed into any other archetype so easily.

[quote="ShinRyu9":10q254mu]So I see that my card is bottom tier. Valid, btw. I knew I wanted "Forumblitz Archer" a little generic, and giving it generic protection effects too. Then Christen mentioned Gemini monsters, and I completely forgot about that too.

I tried buffing it by giving it Down-Right, Down, and Down-Left Link Arrows. I was originally going to do that, but I was little hesitant that might be too strong. But now that you mentioned other Monsters that could do better than it, I knew I had to change that statement entirely.

Summoning conditions are changed too, but perhaps I might make it just "Forumblitz" monsters instead of different names. I haven't changed the passive effects. If it's too generic (which is it) or too strong, I'll change it right away. Feedbacks and/or suggestions are always welcome for my card.[/quote:10q254mu]

I would have it's entire effect just be 'During the turn you Summon this card, you cannot Summon, except "Forumblitz" monsters. Your opponent cannot target monsters this card points to for attacks or by card effects.'
The ATK boosting effect for what it points to isn't necessary in my opinion since the Forumblitz xyz monsters already boost ATK.

Also I would make it's summoning requirement just be 2+ "Forumblitz" monsters so you can use the link-2 monster and any other to summon it. Requiring it's materials to have different names isn't necessary.

Changed

[quote="ShinRyu9":2mmpulqr]Changed[/quote:2mmpulqr]

Change it's first effect from
During the turn this card is Link Summoned, you cannot Special Summon other monsters, except "Forumblitz" monsters
to
During the turn you Link Summon this card, you cannot Special Summon, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

It's effect will still work the same but will be shorter and easier to read.

[quote="Saraak":1nl0ibf5][quote="Christen57":1nl0ibf5] I would change researcher's effect to this:

When an attack is declared involving this Link Summoned card: You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" Spells/Traps that is in your Deck, GY, or that is banished to your hand. If this card leaves the field: You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that is in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, or that is banished to your hand. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Researcher" once per turn.[/quote:1nl0ibf5]
Not a bad idea, but I still want it to be able to have a special eff when summoned using the Union/Gemini monsters, so I've changed it. The first effect you mentioned is added, except I added a clause where if the added card was an equip spell, it could equip itself to Researcher. I've removed the previous Union/Gemini effects and changed it into this: "If your opponent activates a card, and this card was Link Summoned using a Gemini monster (Quick Effect): negate the activation, then if you also used a Union monster to Link Summon this card, add 1 "Forumbliz" monster from your Deck, GY, or face-up in your Extra Deck to your hand"

[quote="Christen57":1nl0ibf5] I would make the gemini a level 4 and change it's effect to this:

This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the GY. While this card is a Normal Monster on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect:
● (Quick Effect): You can Special Summon 2 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or that are banished, but their effects are negated. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Apprentice" once per turn.[/quote:1nl0ibf5]
Yeah, that's reasonable. No issue with changing it into that.

[quote="Christen57":1nl0ibf5] I would change the trap's effect to this:

During the Battle or End Phase: Special Summon a number of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your Deck, GY, face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or that are banished equal to the number of "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones, but they cannot attack this turn. If you have 3 or more cards in your hand, you can activate this card the turn it was Set. You can only activate 1 "Forumblitz Barricade" per turn.[/quote:1nl0ibf5]
Yeah, that's fair. Although, I'm almost certain that this archetype is 90% busted and a Tier-1 deck purely because of how consistent it is. Some of these cards need to lock the player out of summoning outside of their archetype. I can easily imagine these cards being used as an engine in other decks to bring out powerful Rank 4 Xyz and Level 8 Synchro monsters. With that in mind, I'm adding an archetype summoning limit to the Trap card. That's just my opinion, though, and probably unneeded, but I can't help but be wary.[/quote:1nl0ibf5]

I noticed another grammar error in Forumblitz Apprentice that I missed earlier. It says '2 of your "Forumblitz" monster' when it should say '2 of your "Forumblitz" monsters' where "monster" should be plural.

Also, if you replace "face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or banished" with "banished, and/or face-up Extra Deck" it will make the effect shorter and easier to read.

Also, you can make Forumblitz Professor's effect shorter and easier to read by changing it from

If this card is in your hand, and you control a face-up "Forumblitz" monster: You can Equip this card to a face-up monster you control. If this card is equipped to a "Forumblitz" Effect monster: You can Unequip this card to Special Summon it. A monster equipped with this card cannot be selected as an attack target. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Professor" once per turn.

to

You can either: Equip this card from your hand to a "Forumblitz" monster you control, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Professor" up to twice per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters. A monster equipped with this card cannot be targeted for attacks.

[quote="james123":231dsnvo]https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2206439[/quote:231dsnvo]

I recommend changing the forumblitz link-4 monster's monster effect to this:

If you can Pendulum Summon Level 4, you can Pendulum Summon this face-up card in your Extra Deck. When this card is Link Summoned: You can roll a six-sided die, then target up to that many cards on the field; destroy them. If this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the GY: You can Special Summon 1 "Forumblitz Officer Token" (Warrior/FIRE/Level 4/ATK 2000/DEF 2000) in Defense Position, but it cannot be used as Link material. If this monster you control is destroyed: You can place it in your Pendulum Zone.

and it's pendulum effect to this:

You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" cards that is in your Deck, GY, banished, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Corps" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

Sorry I've been inactive for a while, even if I'm the main host. Anyway, changed Blight eff and Scout's eff as Christen's asked for
EDIT: Also changed Scout's artwork for a better cropped artwork.

[quote="Christen57":2j7s9574] I noticed another grammar error in Forumblitz Apprentice that I missed earlier. It says '2 of your "Forumblitz" monster' when it should say '2 of your "Forumblitz" monsters' where "monster" should be plural.

Also, if you replace "face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or banished" with "banished, and/or face-up Extra Deck" it will make the effect shorter and easier to read.[/quote:2j7s9574]
Yeah, I missed that, and thanks for the word shortening advice.


[quote="Christen57":2j7s9574]Also, you can make Forumblitz Professor's effect shorter and easier to read by changing it from

If this card is in your hand, and you control a face-up "Forumblitz" monster: You can Equip this card to a face-up monster you control. If this card is equipped to a "Forumblitz" Effect monster: You can Unequip this card to Special Summon it. A monster equipped with this card cannot be selected as an attack target. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Professor" once per turn.

to

You can either: Equip this card from your hand to a "Forumblitz" monster you control, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Professor" up to twice per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters. A monster equipped with this card cannot be targeted for attacks.[/quote:2j7s9574]
This actually slightly buffs professor by making her able to be unequipped from Forumblitz Apprentice, which may never happen, but it can happen now. Not too big of a deal to change.

[quote="Saraak":luqbisn5][quote="Christen57":luqbisn5] I noticed another grammar error in Forumblitz Apprentice that I missed earlier. It says '2 of your "Forumblitz" monster' when it should say '2 of your "Forumblitz" monsters' where "monster" should be plural.

Also, if you replace "face-up in your Extra Deck, and/or banished" with "banished, and/or face-up Extra Deck" it will make the effect shorter and easier to read.[/quote:luqbisn5]
Yeah, I missed that, and thanks for the word shortening advice.


[quote="Christen57":luqbisn5]Also, you can make Forumblitz Professor's effect shorter and easier to read by changing it from

If this card is in your hand, and you control a face-up "Forumblitz" monster: You can Equip this card to a face-up monster you control. If this card is equipped to a "Forumblitz" Effect monster: You can Unequip this card to Special Summon it. A monster equipped with this card cannot be selected as an attack target. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Professor" once per turn.

to

You can either: Equip this card from your hand to a "Forumblitz" monster you control, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Professor" up to twice per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters. A monster equipped with this card cannot be targeted for attacks.[/quote:luqbisn5]
This actually slightly buffs professor by making her able to be unequipped from Forumblitz Apprentice, which may never happen, but it can happen now. Not too big of a deal to change.[/quote:luqbisn5]

It also slightly nerfs her by making her only able to equip herself to a forumblitz monster instead of just any face-up monster.

Also, Forumblitz Apprentice's quick effect proved to be a bit too strong during testing, so it should be toned down a little by making it not a quick effect.

Also, her text that says "This card is treated as a Normal monster while this card is face-up on the field or in the GY" can be made shorter by taking out the second "this card is" part so it just says "This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the GY."

Also, instead of just "Normal Summon it to become an Effect Monster with this effect:" it should say "Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect."

Changed some of Monitoring's eff
Ritual is now hand rip.
Xyz now attach 2 cards.
Link now SS James123's Officer Token (Also can't be used as link material)
EDIT: Also removed HOPT

[quote="Christen57":20wspk2m]Also, Forumblitz Apprentice's quick effect proved to be a bit too strong during testing, so it should be toned down a little by making it not a quick effect.

Also, her text that says "This card is treated as a Normal monster while this card is face-up on the field or in the GY" can be made shorter by taking out the second "this card is" part so it just says "This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the GY."

Also, instead of just "Normal Summon it to become an Effect Monster with this effect:" it should say "Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect."[/quote:20wspk2m]

I guess buffing it to two monsters per summon was too much when it was a quick effect, even if she only gets her effect next turn via normal summon. Fixes to the PSCT have been added and the removal of its Quick Effect status was applied. Hopefully, it proves to be more balanced now.

Although, how was it broken as a quick effect? Was it because you could just use her effect and keep her on the field instead of using it as material for a summon in order to use her effect on the opponent's turn– actually, typing that out made me realize how busted an effect like that I. Even if its on a gemini monster as a Quick Effect, Gemini Ablation can get around that completely and Special Summon it at full power. I may have to add a 'but banish them when they leave the field' clause to the effect too, and prevent summoning outside the archetype.

[quote="KTeknis":1bl5laba]Changed some of Monitoring's eff
Ritual is now hand rip.
Xyz now attach 2 cards.
Link now SS James123's Officer Token (Also can't be used as link material)
EDIT: Also removed HOPT[/quote:1bl5laba]

Effects that lower the opponent's hand count tend to be unhealthy for the game unless it's specifically during the battle phase or something. I would change that effect so it makes your opponent draw then discard a random card or have you look at their hand and discard a card, instead of just them discarding.

Also the synchro effect of monitoring says "1 card your opponent control" instead of "1 card your opponent controls" so control is plural.

Singular subjects are usually followed by plural predicates, and plural subjects are usually followed by singular predicates.

Since "your opponent" is singular, you say "your opponent controls" where control is plural, but if when referring to your opponent as "they" then you say "they control" where control is singular, since "they" is plural but could still refer to just 1 opponent in yugioh.

The reason I say they "are usually followed" is because there are exceptions to this, like if the subject is "I" or "You". In that case, you would say "I control" or "You control" instead of "I controls" or "You controls".

Also, for the xyz effect of monitoring, you can replace "opponent GY to the summoned monster" with just "opponent's GY to it" to make it shorter and easier to read.

Also, I don't think the second protection effect of forumblitz scout is necessary, so you should replace 'Once per turn, if a "Forumblitz" card(s) in your Pendulum Zone would be destroyed by monster effect, you can destroy 1 monster you control instead' with 'You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters'

Forumblitz seems to already have more enough protections and whatnot.

Also, Forumblitz Attack's effect can be made shorter and easier to read by changing it to:

You can only use each of these effects of "Forumblitz Attack" once per turn.
● If you control a "Forumblitz" monster that was Special Summoned from the hand and have a "Forumblitz" card in your Pendulum Zone: You can target 1 face-up card; add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand, and if you do, destroy that target.
● If you control a "Forumblitz" monster that was Special Summoned from the Extra Deck: You can target 1 monster your opponent controls; add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand, and if you do, change that target's battle position.

Having a total of 2 destructions, 3 searches, and a battle position change all on a single card seems like too much anyway so I figured I'd reduce it to 1 destruction, 2 searches, and a battle position change.

Also could you change forumblitz admiration's first sentence from
'Fusion Summon 1 "Forumblitz Admiral" from your Extra Deck, using monsters from your hand or field as material'
to
'Fusion or Link Summon 1 "Forumblitz" Fusion or Link Monster from your Extra Deck, using monsters from your hand or field as material'?

[quote="Saraak":1bl5laba][quote="Christen57":1bl5laba]Also, Forumblitz Apprentice's quick effect proved to be a bit too strong during testing, so it should be toned down a little by making it not a quick effect.

Also, her text that says "This card is treated as a Normal monster while this card is face-up on the field or in the GY" can be made shorter by taking out the second "this card is" part so it just says "This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the GY."

Also, instead of just "Normal Summon it to become an Effect Monster with this effect:" it should say "Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect."[/quote:1bl5laba]

I guess buffing it to two monsters per summon was too much when it was a quick effect, even if she only gets her effect next turn via normal summon. Fixes to the PSCT have been added and the removal of its Quick Effect status was applied. Hopefully, it proves to be more balanced now.

Although, how was it broken as a quick effect? Was it because you could just use her effect and keep her on the field instead of using it as material for a summon in order to use her effect on the opponent's turn– actually, typing that out made me realize how busted an effect like that I. Even if its on a gemini monster as a Quick Effect, Gemini Ablation can get around that completely and Special Summon it at full power. I may have to add a 'but banish them when they leave the field' clause to the effect too, and prevent summoning outside the archetype.[/quote:1bl5laba]

What made her quick effect so strong was the fact that she could be pendulum summoned from the hand then normal summoned, without me having to normal summon previously that turn beforehand, so I could use her effect turn 1, and she could bring out 2 materials which makes 3 materials when combined with herself. Since it was a quick effect, I could unlock her effect, then use it turn after turn to bring out free monsters, specifically ones that triggered effects when they left the field or were used for xyz summons, generating even more advantage.

For now, I would just have it's unlocked effect be:

You can Special Summon 2 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your Deck, GY, banished, and/or face-up Extra Deck, negate their effects, banish them during the End Phase, also you cannot Summon for the rest of this turn, except "Forumblitz" monsters. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Apprentice" once per turn.

It's shorter and easier to read this way.

[quote="Christen57":1jurgs1k]Also, who is the "Rom" guy that created Forumblitz - Tommy for this archetype? I'd like him to remove the dash in the name and change the effect to:

Equip only to a "Forumblitz" monster. It gains this effect.
● Once per turn, during the Main Phase, if the only Equip Card you control is 1 "Forumblitz Tommy" (Quick Effect): You can send 1 Spell/Trap you control to the GY, then target 2 face-up cards your opponent controls; destroy them.[/quote:1jurgs1k]
The one posted the cards is Renji Asuka, so It's probably his cards on his alt:
[quote="Renji Asuka":1jurgs1k]Saw this post and it seemed fun.

Also I decided to throw in a card type a lot of decks don't use!

Forumblitz - Tommy: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2185906
Spell
Equip
Can only be equipped to a "Forumblitz" monster. The equipped monster gains 800 ATK. (Quick Effect): You can destroy this card, target up to 2 cards your opponent controls; destroy them.

Forumblitz - Dual Wield: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2185914

Spell
Continuous
Once per turn if a "Forumblitz" Equip Spell is in the GY: You can banish 1 "Forumblitz" Equip Spell from your GY; Equip 2 Equip Spells to 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control. (1 from your hand and 1 from your Deck.) You can only use the effect of "Forumblitz - Dual Wield" once per turn.

I'm sure I worded the 2nd one a bit terribly, but you get the idea.[/quote:1jurgs1k]

Alright, Monitoring's Ritual eff is negate up to 2 face up cards.
Changed Scout and Attack's effect.
Also, for Admiration, I could, but one question is if that's the correct wording. Usually card effect that does Link Summon like that is worded like this: Immediately after this effect resolves, Link Summon....
Also I don't know if you can make a card that uses hand as material for non-Fusion/Ritual?

[quote="KTeknis":3n1t6wud]Alright, Monitoring's Ritual eff is negate up to 2 face up cards.
Changed Scout and Attack's effect.
Also, for Admiration, I could, but one question is if that's the correct wording. Usually card effect that does Link Summon like that is worded like this: Immediately after this effect resolves, Link Summon....
Also I don't know if you can make a card that uses hand as material for non-Fusion/Ritual?[/quote:3n1t6wud]

Plenty of cards exist that let you use cards in your hand as synchro/link material.

Code Radiator, Code Generator, and Micro Coder all say 'If a Cyberse monster you control would be used as Link Material for a "Code Talker" monster, this card in your hand can also be used as material.'

Mara of the Nordic Alfar and Malefic Parallel Gear have effects that specifically require you to use materials in your hand when synchro summoning with them.

Evilswarm Kerykeion and Constellar Sombre both say you can activate their effects to normal summon without including the "immediately after this effect resolves" part.

Alright, I guess. Admiration's effect has been changed.

[quote="KTeknis":1h1i09qi][quote="Christen57":1h1i09qi]Also, who is the "Rom" guy that created Forumblitz - Tommy for this archetype? I'd like him to remove the dash in the name and change the effect to:

Equip only to a "Forumblitz" monster. It gains this effect.
● Once per turn, during the Main Phase, if the only Equip Card you control is 1 "Forumblitz Tommy" (Quick Effect): You can send 1 Spell/Trap you control to the GY, then target 2 face-up cards your opponent controls; destroy them.[/quote:1h1i09qi]
The one posted the cards is Renji Asuka, so It's probably his cards on his alt:
[quote="Renji Asuka":1h1i09qi]Saw this post and it seemed fun.

Also I decided to throw in a card type a lot of decks don't use!

Forumblitz - Tommy: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2185906
Spell
Equip
Can only be equipped to a "Forumblitz" monster. The equipped monster gains 800 ATK. (Quick Effect): You can destroy this card, target up to 2 cards your opponent controls; destroy them.

Forumblitz - Dual Wield: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2185914

Spell
Continuous
Once per turn if a "Forumblitz" Equip Spell is in the GY: You can banish 1 "Forumblitz" Equip Spell from your GY; Equip 2 Equip Spells to 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control. (1 from your hand and 1 from your Deck.) You can only use the effect of "Forumblitz - Dual Wield" once per turn.

I'm sure I worded the 2nd one a bit terribly, but you get the idea.[/quote:1h1i09qi][/quote:1h1i09qi]
Rom is actually my main on DB, Renji Asuka is just my forum name.

[quote="Renji Asuka":2mm5944y][quote="KTeknis":2mm5944y][quote="Christen57":2mm5944y]Also, who is the "Rom" guy that created Forumblitz - Tommy for this archetype? I'd like him to remove the dash in the name and change the effect to:

Equip only to a "Forumblitz" monster. It gains this effect.
● Once per turn, during the Main Phase, if the only Equip Card you control is 1 "Forumblitz Tommy" (Quick Effect): You can send 1 Spell/Trap you control to the GY, then target 2 face-up cards your opponent controls; destroy them.[/quote:2mm5944y]
The one posted the cards is Renji Asuka, so It's probably his cards on his alt:
[quote="Renji Asuka":2mm5944y]Saw this post and it seemed fun.

Also I decided to throw in a card type a lot of decks don't use!

Forumblitz - Tommy: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2185906
Spell
Equip
Can only be equipped to a "Forumblitz" monster. The equipped monster gains 800 ATK. (Quick Effect): You can destroy this card, target up to 2 cards your opponent controls; destroy them.

Forumblitz - Dual Wield: https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2185914

Spell
Continuous
Once per turn if a "Forumblitz" Equip Spell is in the GY: You can banish 1 "Forumblitz" Equip Spell from your GY; Equip 2 Equip Spells to 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control. (1 from your hand and 1 from your Deck.) You can only use the effect of "Forumblitz - Dual Wield" once per turn.

I'm sure I worded the 2nd one a bit terribly, but you get the idea.[/quote:2mm5944y][/quote:2mm5944y]
Rom is actually my main on DB, Renji Asuka is just my forum name.[/quote:2mm5944y]

Well then, could you change Forumblitz - Tommy to just Forumblitz Tommy without the dash, and change it's effect to the one I described?

Also could you remove the dash from Forumblitz Dual Wield and change it's effect to this?

You can target 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control; return any number of Spells/Traps you control to the hand, also you can equip 1 of your "Forumblitz Professor" or "Forumblitz Tommy" that is in your Deck, GY, or banished to that target. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Dual Wield" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

[quote="KTeknis":1giqzkfb]Alright, I guess. Admiration's effect has been changed.[/quote:1giqzkfb]

You forgot to include the period after "material".

Also, after 'You can only activate 1 "Forumblitz Admiration" per turn,' could you add 'You cannot Summon the turn you activate this card, except "Forumblitz" monsters.' to the end of it?

Also, you should change the ritual effect of Forumblitz Monitoring to just "Negate the effects of 1 face-up card your opponent controls until the end of this turn."

Cards never simply "Negate a face-up card". They either "Negate the activation" or "Negate the effects of a face-up card".

Also, when Forumblitz Rookie says 'all face-up monsters you control are "Forumblitz" monster," that "monster" at the end has to be plural since you're referring to "monsters you control" which is plural, so it's effect should say:

If you control no monsters, or all monsters you control are "Forumblitz" monsters: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Rookie" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you Summon this card, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

It's effect to change a level to 4 is no longer necessary in my opinion since pretty much every monster in the archetype was already made level 4.

Also, for Forumblitz Blight Commander, you don't need those apostrophes in it's pendulum effect. There should be a period between "hand" and "You can only," not an apostrophe.

For it's monster effect, where it says:
If you control a face-up "Forumblitz" Normal, Ritual, Fusion, Synchro, or Link monster, You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a "Forumblitz Field Commander" you control as material.

The "You" after that last comma shouldn't be capitalized since you aren't starting a sentence with it or having it after a colon.

Also, you don't need to say If you control a face-up "Forumblitz" Normal, Ritual, Fusion, Synchro, or Link monster. You can just say 'If you control a "Forumblitz" Ritual, Fusion, or Link monster' without including the "face-up" part.

Also, it can be balanced a little by removing "Normal" and "Synchro" from the list of monsters you can control to summon it, making it so you need a "Forumblitz" Ritual, Fusion, or Link Monster only. The normal and synchro forumblitz monsters are too versatile and easy to bring out in my opinion to be included in what you can control.

Also, for Forumblitz Field Commander, I recommend either removing the first effect to make your monsters gain 300 ATK for each of it's materials, or changing the ATK gain to 500 or 1000 instead of 300 so it's easier to calculate in the player's head.

Also it shouldn't say 2 Level 4 "Forumblitz" Monster. with a period at the end. It should say 2 Level 4 "Forumblitz" monsters where "monster" is lower case and there is no period after it.

Also, where it says "for each Xyz Material attached to this" you don't need to say "Xyz Material". You can just say "material".

Also since there aren't any more forumblitz monsters with a level other than 4 you can special summon from the hand with this effect, you can replace:
Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Forumblitz" monster
with just:
Special Summon 1 "Forumblitz" monster
to make the effect shorter and easier to read.

Also, since Forumblitz Monitoring now has an effect to negate face-up cards, you should change Forumblitz Retreat's entire effect to:

Target any number of your "Forumblitz" cards that are on your field, GY, and/or banished; shuffle them into the Deck, then draw cards equal to the number of different monster card types you targeted with this effect (Normal, Ritual, Fusion, Synchro, Xyz, and Link). You cannot Summon the turn you activate this card, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

[quote="Christen57":ui2lkn4f][quote="Renji Asuka":ui2lkn4f][quote="KTeknis":ui2lkn4f]
The one posted the cards is Renji Asuka, so It's probably his cards on his alt:
[/quote:ui2lkn4f]
Rom is actually my main on DB, Renji Asuka is just my forum name.[/quote:ui2lkn4f]

Well then, could you change Forumblitz - Tommy to just Forumblitz Tommy without the dash, and change it's effect to the one I described?

Also could you remove the dash from Forumblitz Dual Wield and change it's effect to this?

You can target 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control; return any number of Spells/Traps you control to the hand, also you can equip 1 of your "Forumblitz Professor" or "Forumblitz Tommy" that is in your Deck, GY, or banished to that target. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Dual Wield" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters.[/quote:ui2lkn4f]
Shouldn't it say "You cannot Summon monsters the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters?

That's pretty extensive review there, holy heck.
I once thinked of giving Rookie another second eff rather than removing it completely, but I think it's already versatile enough.
For Blight, I was a bit reluctant at first to remove the Synchro part of the effect, but I guess it would give the deck too much OTK Potential.
Also for Field Commander, 500 ATK buff to all Forumblitz is a bit too high, so I go with removing the effect, but dang, he now has the second shortest effect in the entire Forumblitz, rivaled only by Tommy. I was thinking of making the ATK buff 200 or 100 instead, maybe it's also easy countable too.

[quote="Renji Asuka":2isb201n][quote="Christen57":2isb201n][quote="Renji Asuka":2isb201n]
Rom is actually my main on DB, Renji Asuka is just my forum name.[/quote:2isb201n]

Well then, could you change Forumblitz - Tommy to just Forumblitz Tommy without the dash, and change it's effect to the one I described?

Also could you remove the dash from Forumblitz Dual Wield and change it's effect to this?

You can target 1 "Forumblitz" monster you control; return any number of Spells/Traps you control to the hand, also you can equip 1 of your "Forumblitz Professor" or "Forumblitz Tommy" that is in your Deck, GY, or banished to that target. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Dual Wield" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters.[/quote:2isb201n]
Shouldn't it say "You cannot Summon monsters the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters?[/quote:2isb201n]

I found that saying "You cannot Summon monsters" isn't necessary and that just saying "You cannot Summon" is enough. Cards like Backup Warrior already say "You cannot Synchro Summon the turn you Special Summon this card" without including "monsters". This is because whenever a card says you can't summon something, by default it is assumed that monsters are what you can't summon since you can't "summon" a spell/trap or "summon" something that isn't a monster anyway.

[quote="parhelia_0000":zxngck0c]Here are my cards, enjoy!

Forumblitz Synchron https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2184281
If you control a "Forumblitz" monster, other than "Forumblitz Synchron," you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Summoned: You can add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck to your hand, then send the top card of your Deck to the GY. When this card is used as material for the Summon of a "Forumblitz" monster from your Extra Deck, draw 1 card. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Synchron" once per turn.

Forumblitz Highlander https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2184290
Pendulum Effect:
You cannot Pendulum Summon monsters, except Warrior monsters. This effect cannot be negated. Once per turn, if you do not have another "Forumblitz" monster in your other Pendulum Zone: you can add 1 "Forumblitz" Pendulum monster from your Deck to your hand.

Monster Effect:
"Forumblitz Synchron" + 1+ non-Tuner monsters
Must first be Synchro Summoned. Cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects. Non-Warrior monsters in your opponent's possession cannot activate their effects during the Battle Phase. If this card is Synchro Summoned: You can target 1 Warrior monster in your GY; Special Summon it, but its effects are negated, also inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the original ATK of the Summoned monster. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage. If this card is destroyed or Banished: You can destroy as many cards in your Pendulum Zones as possible (min. 1), and if you do, place this card in your Pendulum Zone.[/quote:zxngck0c]

You can make Forumblitz Synchron's effect shorter and easier to read by changing it's effect to this:

If you control a "Forumblitz" monster: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Summoned: You can add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck to your hand, then send the top card of your Deck to the GY. If this card is used as Fusion, Synchro, or Link Material for a "Forumblitz" monster: Draw 1 card. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Synchron" once per turn.

Also you can make Forumblitz Highlander's effects easier to read by changing it's monster effect to this:

"Forumblitz Synchron" + 1+ non-Tuner monsters
Must first be Synchro Summoned. If this card is Synchro Summoned: You can target 1 of your "Forumblitz" monsters that is banished or in your GY; inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that target's ATK, and if you do, Special Summon it, but negate its effects. Cannot be targeted by an opponent's card effects. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage. If this monster leaves the field: You can destroy up to 2 cards you control, and if you do, you can place this card in your Pendulum Zone.

and it's pendulum effect to this:

Once per turn: You can add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck, GY, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

Also you can make Forumblitz Highlander's effect shorter and easier to read by changing it's effect to this:

"Forumblitz Synchron" + 1 "Forumblitz" Pendulum Monster + 1 "Forumblitz" monster
Must be either Fusion Summoned, or Special Summoned by Tributing the above monsters you control. Cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects. You never take damage if the amount is less than or equal to this card's ATK. If your "Forumblitz" monster attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. When this card inflicts battle damage to the opponent: You can target 1 "Forumblitz" Spell/Trap in your GY; Set it, and if it is a Trap, it can be activated this turn. When this card leaves the field: You can Special Summon 1 "Forumblitz" monster from your Deck in Defense Position.

Also you can make Forumblitz Gunner's effects shorter and easier to read by changing it's monster effect to this:

If this card is Summoned: You can target any number of cards you control; destroy them, and if you do, add "Forumblitz" monsters from your Deck, GY, and/or face-up Extra Deck to your hand equal to the number of cards destroyed. You can banish 2 "Forumblitz" cards from your GY; Special Summon 1 "Forumblitz" monster from your Deck. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Gunner" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate either of this card's effects, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

and it's pendulum effect to this:

Once per turn, if you would take damage from a battle involving your "Forumblitz" monster, you can draw 1 card instead.

I see good progress made here.

[quote="parhelia_0000":3gezujeo]Here are my cards, enjoy!

Forumblitz Synchron https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2184281
If you control a "Forumblitz" monster, other than "Forumblitz Synchron," you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Summoned: You can add 1 "Forumblitz" card from your Deck to your hand, then send the top card of your Deck to the GY. When this card is used as material for the Summon of a "Forumblitz" monster from your Extra Deck, draw 1 card. You can only use each effect of "Forumblitz Synchron" once per turn.

Forumblitz Highlander https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2184290
Pendulum Effect:
You cannot Pendulum Summon monsters, except Warrior monsters. This effect cannot be negated. Once per turn, if you do not have another "Forumblitz" monster in your other Pendulum Zone: you can add 1 "Forumblitz" Pendulum monster from your Deck to your hand.

Monster Effect:
"Forumblitz Synchron" + 1+ non-Tuner monsters
Must first be Synchro Summoned. Cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects. Non-Warrior monsters in your opponent's possession cannot activate their effects during the Battle Phase. If this card is Synchro Summoned: You can target 1 Warrior monster in your GY; Special Summon it, but its effects are negated, also inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the original ATK of the Summoned monster. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage. If this card is destroyed or Banished: You can destroy as many cards in your Pendulum Zones as possible (min. 1), and if you do, place this card in your Pendulum Zone.[/quote:3gezujeo]

I just realized I made a grammar mistake with Forumblitz Admiral. Where it says "inflicts battle damage to the opponent" it should instead say "inflicts battle damage to your opponent".

Also, you can make Forumblitz Highlander's effect shorter and easier to read by changing it's monster effect to this:

"Forumblitz Synchron" + 1 non-Tuner "Forumblitz" monster
If this card is Synchro Summoned: You can target 1 Warrior monster in your GY; inflict damage to your opponent equal to half its ATK, and if you do, Special Summon it, but negate its effects. Cannot be targeted by an opponent's card effects. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage. When this monster leaves the field: You can destroy up to 2 cards you control, and if you do, you can place this card in your Pendulum Zone.

Also you can make Forumblitz Gunner's pendulum effect shorter and easier to read by changing the entire effect to just this:

During the turn you activate this card, you cannot Summon, except "Forumblitz" monsters. Once per turn, if you would take damage from a battle involving your "Forumblitz" monster, you can draw 1 card instead.

[quote="KTeknis":3gezujeo]That's pretty extensive review there, holy heck.
I once thinked of giving Rookie another second eff rather than removing it completely, but I think it's already versatile enough.
For Blight, I was a bit reluctant at first to remove the Synchro part of the effect, but I guess it would give the deck too much OTK Potential.
Also for Field Commander, 500 ATK buff to all Forumblitz is a bit too high, so I go with removing the effect, but dang, he now has the second shortest effect in the entire Forumblitz, rivaled only by Tommy. I was thinking of making the ATK buff 200 or 100 instead, maybe it's also easy countable too.[/quote:3gezujeo]

You can make Forumblitz Field Commander's effect a soft once per turn instead of a hard once per turn. A hard once per turn isn't necessary.

Once per turn: You can detach 1 material from this card; Special Summon 1 "Forumblitz" monster from your hand. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

Also, it's materials should say "Forumblitz" monsters not "Forumblitz" Monsters.

You never put a period at the end of a monster's listed Fusion, Synchro, Xyz, or Link Materials, and you only capitalize that M if you're starting a sentence with it, using it right after a colon, or specifically referring to Normal Monsters, Effect Monsters, Ritual Monsters, Fusion Monsters, Synchro Monsters, Xyz Monsters, Pendulum Monsters, or Link Monsters. You don't capitalize the M when you're referring to just "Forumblitz" monsters. When you're referring to an archetype's name followed by "monsters" then monsters is lower case, but when you're starting a sentence with monsters, having monsters right after a colon, or referring specifically to Normal, Effect, Ritual, Fusion, Synchro, Xyz, Pendulum, or Link "Monsters" then monsters is upper case.

Speaking of which, where Forumblitz Monitoring says "but it cannot be used as Link material," the word "material" should be capitalized since you're referring to a link material.

[quote="james123":3gezujeo]https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2204546
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=2204544[/quote:3gezujeo]

Where Forumblitz Corps says "but it cannot be used as Link material," the word "material" should be capitalized since you're referring to a link material.

Also you should change Forumblitz Corps's pendulum effect to this:

You can add 1 of your "Forumblitz" cards that is in your Deck, GY, banished, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Forumblitz Corps" once per turn. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this effect, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

Also you can make Forumblitz Drop-Off's effect easier to read by changing it to this:

Add 1 of your Level 4 "Forumblitz" monsters that is in your Deck, GY, banished, or face-up Extra Deck to your hand. You can banish this card from your GY; Ritual Summon 1 "Forumblitz Stealth Agent" from your hand by Tributing "Forumblitz" monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels equal 7 or more. You can only use 1 "Forumblitz Drop-Off" effect per turn, and only once that turn.

What this? 0.o

[quote="Lil Oldman":24wjahqe]What this? 0.o[/quote:24wjahqe]
Just me trying to do small counity project on the forum. You're interested?

[quote="KTeknis":1etft9m0][quote="Lil Oldman":1etft9m0]What this? 0.o[/quote:1etft9m0]
Just me trying to do small counity project on the forum. You're interested?[/quote:1etft9m0]
Maybe, but I am more into gimmick decks. I like the idea, but it might not be for me.

[quote="KTeknis":1jg872bb][quote="Lil Oldman":1jg872bb]What this? 0.o[/quote:1jg872bb]
Just me trying to do small counity project on the forum. You're interested?[/quote:1jg872bb]

I noticed with Forumblitz Monitoring, where it says "monsters from your opponent GY" the word opponent should instead be "opponent's" with an apostrophe followed by the S since you're referring to a singular possessive noun. Also where it says "cannot be used as Link material" the word material there should be capitalized since you're referring to a specific kind of material.

Also can you change Forumblitz Scout's monster effect so instead of drawing 3 cards you draw 2?

Also Forumblitz Field Commander still should have monsters be lowercase instead of uppercase, where it shows the materials required to xyz summon it.

Also where Forumblitz Blight Commander says "Ritual, Fusion, or Link monster" that word monster should be capitalized since you're referring to the term Link Monster.

[quote="Saraak":1jg872bb][quote="Christen57":1jg872bb]Also, Forumblitz Apprentice's quick effect proved to be a bit too strong during testing, so it should be toned down a little by making it not a quick effect.

Also, her text that says "This card is treated as a Normal monster while this card is face-up on the field or in the GY" can be made shorter by taking out the second "this card is" part so it just says "This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the GY."

Also, instead of just "Normal Summon it to become an Effect Monster with this effect:" it should say "Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect."[/quote:1jg872bb]

I guess buffing it to two monsters per summon was too much when it was a quick effect, even if she only gets her effect next turn via normal summon. Fixes to the PSCT have been added and the removal of its Quick Effect status was applied. Hopefully, it proves to be more balanced now.

Although, how was it broken as a quick effect? Was it because you could just use her effect and keep her on the field instead of using it as material for a summon in order to use her effect on the opponent's turn– actually, typing that out made me realize how busted an effect like that I. Even if its on a gemini monster as a Quick Effect, Gemini Ablation can get around that completely and Special Summon it at full power. I may have to add a 'but banish them when they leave the field' clause to the effect too, and prevent summoning outside the archetype.[/quote:1jg872bb]

Can you make Forumblitz Barricade's effect shorter and easier to read by changing it to this?

During the Battle or End Phase: Special Summon a number of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your hand, GY, banished, and/or face-up Extra Deck equal to the number of "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones, but they cannot declare an attack this turn and their effects are negated. If you have 3 or more cards in your hand, you can activate this card the turn it was Set. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this card, except "Forumblitz" monsters.

Alright, the effects are changed. But the way you quote that also mean Lil Oldman will also get notification, while the message is intended to be for me only.

It isn't that big of a deal lmao

Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.

[quote="DarwisBellium92":vfrmq9rj]Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.[/quote:vfrmq9rj]

Who would want this *Continuous card?

[quote="Jedx_EX":2n8lsjye][quote="DarwisBellium92":2n8lsjye]Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.[/quote:2n8lsjye]

Who would want this *Continuous card?[/quote:2n8lsjye]
Again?! Are you still kidding me!! Oh, c'mon! You did not understand that this archetype does not stand up to those I created myself, your archetypes are "dead archetypes", logic.

[quote="DarwisBellium92":ifi4gosl][quote="Jedx_EX":ifi4gosl][quote="DarwisBellium92":ifi4gosl]Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.[/quote:ifi4gosl]

Who would want this *Continuous card?[/quote:ifi4gosl]
Again?! Are you still kidding me!! You did not understand that this archetype does not stand up to those I created myself, your archetypes are "dead archetypes", logic.[/quote:ifi4gosl]
You were just a retard who was abused by your dad, get kicked around on DA, and listen to crappy Italian Rap. Now SCRAM!

[quote="james123":3hiuspqb][quote="DarwisBellium92":3hiuspqb][quote="Jedx_EX":3hiuspqb]

Who would want this *Continuous card?[/quote:3hiuspqb]
Again?! Are you still kidding me!! You did not understand that this archetype does not stand up to those I created myself, your archetypes are "dead archetypes", logic.[/quote:3hiuspqb]
You were just a retard who was abused by your dad, get kicked around on DA, and listen to crappy Italian Rap. Now SCRAM! [/quote:3hiuspqb]
You're wrong, I prefer the 80s Italodisco music. Here you see, you don't understand anything about my life instead of doing your useless bullying and "keyboard lion".
Tsk XD

[quote="DarwisBellium92":18zp8hrz][quote="james123":18zp8hrz][quote="DarwisBellium92":18zp8hrz]
Again?! Are you still kidding me!! You did not understand that this archetype does not stand up to those I created myself, your archetypes are "dead archetypes", logic.[/quote:18zp8hrz]
You were just a retard who was abused by your dad, get kicked around on DA, and listen to crappy Italian Rap. Now SCRAM! [/quote:18zp8hrz]
You're wrong, I prefer the 80s Italodisco music. Here you see, you don't understand anything about my life instead of doing your useless bullying and "keyboard lion".
Tsk XD[/quote:18zp8hrz]
If you wanna haunt someone, go haunt someone else or else this will get off-topic because of you!

[quote="james123":1c1pjlj6][quote="DarwisBellium92":1c1pjlj6][quote="james123":1c1pjlj6]
You were just a retard who was abused by your dad, get kicked around on DA, and listen to crappy Italian Rap. Now SCRAM! [/quote:1c1pjlj6]
You're wrong, I prefer the 80s Italodisco music. Here you see, you don't understand anything about my life instead of doing your useless bullying and "keyboard lion".
Tsk XD[/quote:1c1pjlj6]
If you wanna haunt someone, go haunt someone else or else this will get off-topic because of you![/quote:1c1pjlj6]
Well, then I contact Konami and I close DB, easy.
This topic are closed.

[quote="DarwisBellium92":1olhwxuh]Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.[/quote:1olhwxuh]

I don't think anyone would run something that negates all of their own cards, unless it's one of those skill drain decks that negates downside effects of monsters such as Beast King Barbaros.

[quote="Christen57":3s8v7dxl][quote="DarwisBellium92":3s8v7dxl]Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.[/quote:3s8v7dxl]

I don't think anyone would run something that negates all of their own cards, unless it's one of those skill drain decks that negates downside effects of monsters such as Beast King Barbaros.[/quote:3s8v7dxl]
Generally, there is always a card of the same archetype acts as an anti-archetype.
Example: machine monsters VS machine monsters that included an effect anti-machine monsters

[quote="DarwisBellium92":1xejfk0u][quote="Christen57":1xejfk0u][quote="DarwisBellium92":1xejfk0u]Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.[/quote:1xejfk0u]

I don't think anyone would run something that negates all of their own cards, unless it's one of those skill drain decks that negates downside effects of monsters such as Beast King Barbaros.[/quote:1xejfk0u]
Generally, there is always a card of the same archetype acts as an anti-archetype.
Example: machine monsters VS machine monsters that included an effect anti-machine monsters[/quote:1xejfk0u]

Wrong example. That's a Monster Type, not an archetype.

Both

[quote="DarwisBellium92":d1uvdltj][quote="Christen57":d1uvdltj][quote="DarwisBellium92":d1uvdltj]Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.[/quote:d1uvdltj]

I don't think anyone would run something that negates all of their own cards, unless it's one of those skill drain decks that negates downside effects of monsters such as Beast King Barbaros.[/quote:d1uvdltj]
Generally, there is always a card of the same archetype acts as an anti-archetype.
Example: machine monsters VS machine monsters that included an effect anti-machine monsters[/quote:d1uvdltj]

Still, something like this would at best be a side deck option given how situational it is and how it only works against 1 specific archetype.

[quote="Christen57":ls7im2i8][quote="DarwisBellium92":ls7im2i8][quote="Christen57":ls7im2i8]

I don't think anyone would run something that negates all of their own cards, unless it's one of those skill drain decks that negates downside effects of monsters such as Beast King Barbaros.[/quote:ls7im2i8]
Generally, there is always a card of the same archetype acts as an anti-archetype.
Example: machine monsters VS machine monsters that included an effect anti-machine monsters[/quote:ls7im2i8]

Still, something like this would at best be a side deck option given how situational it is and how it only works against 1 specific archetype.[/quote:ls7im2i8]
Exact

[quote="DarwisBellium92":2hfi50g5][quote="james123":2hfi50g5][quote="DarwisBellium92":2hfi50g5]
You're wrong, I prefer the 80s Italodisco music. Here you see, you don't understand anything about my life instead of doing your useless bullying and "keyboard lion".
Tsk XD[/quote:2hfi50g5]
If you wanna haunt someone, go haunt someone else or else this will get off-topic because of you![/quote:2hfi50g5]
Well, then I contact Konami and I close DB, easy.
This topic are closed.[/quote:2hfi50g5]
You can't do it! Because what are ya? Some idiotic troll because Konami doesn't give a fucking shit?

[quote="james123":1qqvfhdm][quote="DarwisBellium92":1qqvfhdm][quote="james123":1qqvfhdm]
If you wanna haunt someone, go haunt someone else or else this will get off-topic because of you![/quote:1qqvfhdm]
Well, then I contact Konami and I close DB, easy.
This topic are closed.[/quote:1qqvfhdm]
You can't do it! Because what are ya? Some idiotic troll because Konami doesn't give a fucking shit?[/quote:1qqvfhdm]
This is not a troll and this is not a joke. Because I'm a Konami member.
And you stop trolling other people, you're doing yourself a damage like that useless MikeMadness.

[quote="DarwisBellium92":9rxbqa6w][quote="james123":9rxbqa6w][quote="DarwisBellium92":9rxbqa6w]
Well, then I contact Konami and I close DB, easy.
This topic are closed.[/quote:9rxbqa6w]
You can't do it! Because what are ya? Some idiotic troll because Konami doesn't give a fucking shit?[/quote:9rxbqa6w]
This is not a troll and this is not a joke. Because I'm a Konami member.
And you stop trolling other people, you're doing yourself a damage like that useless MikeMadness.[/quote:9rxbqa6w]
LIES! Yes you are and MikeMadness is a Useful guy and he's not a SORE LOSER and gtfo and get a life you liar troll because MikeMadness and I hunt trolls
Tell it to this guy and his card! https://www.youtube.com/user/TheMikester1994/videos https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=1189705

[quote="james123":3plp3ks0][quote="DarwisBellium92":3plp3ks0][quote="james123":3plp3ks0]
You can't do it! Because what are ya? Some idiotic troll because Konami doesn't give a fucking shit?[/quote:3plp3ks0]
This is not a troll and this is not a joke. Because I'm a Konami member.
And you stop trolling other people, you're doing yourself a damage like that useless MikeMadness.[/quote:3plp3ks0]
LIES! Yes you are and MikeMadness is a Useful guy and he's not a SORE LOSER and gtfo and get a life you liar troll because MikeMadness and I hunt trolls
Tell it to this guy and his card! https://www.youtube.com/user/TheMikester1994/videos https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=1189705[/quote:3plp3ks0]
The troll is you watch yourself.
Oh right, I don't have to talk to you because you are trolling others! XD
And look at you, you are a miserable member and you have no power to do things like that and you put your feet on the ground to reality, I'm sick of your useless cheap cowardice.

[quote="DarwisBellium92":1ehj8juo][quote="james123":1ehj8juo][quote="DarwisBellium92":1ehj8juo]
This is not a troll and this is not a joke. Because I'm a Konami member.
And you stop trolling other people, you're doing yourself a damage like that useless MikeMadness.[/quote:1ehj8juo]
LIES! Yes you are and MikeMadness is a Useful guy and he's not a SORE LOSER and gtfo and get a life you liar troll because MikeMadness and I hunt trolls
Tell it to this guy and his card! https://www.youtube.com/user/TheMikester1994/videos https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=1189705[/quote:1ehj8juo]
The troll is you watch yourself.
Oh right, I don't have to talk to you because you are trolling others! XD
And look at you, you are a miserable member and you have no power to do things like that and you put your feet on the ground to reality, I'm sick of your useless cheap cowardice.[/quote:1ehj8juo]
No I'm not and you're getting this off-topic and stop with this drama right now!

[quote="james123":en3st6em][quote="DarwisBellium92":en3st6em][quote="james123":en3st6em]
LIES! Yes you are and MikeMadness is a Useful guy and he's not a SORE LOSER and gtfo and get a life you liar troll because MikeMadness and I hunt trolls
Tell it to this guy and his card! https://www.youtube.com/user/TheMikester1994/videos https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=1189705[/quote:en3st6em]
The troll is you watch yourself.
Oh right, I don't have to talk to you because you are trolling others! XD
And look at you, you are a miserable member and you have no power to do things like that and you put your feet on the ground to reality, I'm sick of your useless cheap cowardice.[/quote:en3st6em]
No I'm not and you're getting this off-topic and stop with this drama right now![/quote:en3st6em]
You are doing the drama and you are not the admin of a forum or site, logic.

[quote="DarwisBellium92":1lbaz1hv][quote="james123":1lbaz1hv][quote="DarwisBellium92":1lbaz1hv]
The troll is you watch yourself.
Oh right, I don't have to talk to you because you are trolling others! XD
And look at you, you are a miserable member and you have no power to do things like that and you put your feet on the ground to reality, I'm sick of your useless cheap cowardice.[/quote:1lbaz1hv]
No I'm not and you're getting this off-topic and stop with this drama right now![/quote:1lbaz1hv]
You are doing the drama and you are not the admin of a forum or site, logic. [/quote:1lbaz1hv]

[quote="james123":1lbaz1hv][quote="DarwisBellium92":1lbaz1hv]
The troll is you watch yourself.
Oh right, I don't have to talk to you because you are trolling others! XD
And look at you, you are a miserable member and you have no power to do things like that and you put your feet on the ground to reality, I'm sick of your useless cheap cowardice.[/quote:1lbaz1hv]
No I'm not and you're getting this off-topic and stop with this drama right now![/quote:1lbaz1hv]

Can the both of you stop it? This thread is for the archetype we're working on, not for back and forth insults.

[quote="Christen57":go7gqdvc][quote="DarwisBellium92":go7gqdvc][quote="james123":go7gqdvc]
No I'm not and you're getting this off-topic and stop with this drama right now![/quote:go7gqdvc]
You are doing the drama and you are not the admin of a forum or site, logic. [/quote:go7gqdvc]

[quote="james123":go7gqdvc][quote="DarwisBellium92":go7gqdvc]
The troll is you watch yourself.
Oh right, I don't have to talk to you because you are trolling others! XD
And look at you, you are a miserable member and you have no power to do things like that and you put your feet on the ground to reality, I'm sick of your useless cheap cowardice.[/quote:go7gqdvc]
No I'm not and you're getting this off-topic and stop with this drama right now![/quote:go7gqdvc]

Can the both of you stop it? This thread is for the archetype we're working on, not for back and forth insults.[/quote:go7gqdvc]
I didn't do anything, James123 stepped in and attacked me.

Let's continue on this archetype, uff...

Anyway, ideas for a "Forumblitz" Ritual Pendulum Monsters or hand trap effect?

[quote="DarwisBellium92":23166jc7]Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.[/quote:23166jc7]
At first I though you were either joking or trolling with that submission. You saying that the project is "Dead Archetype" and "Does not stand up to your archetype" and you threatening to "Shut Down DB" and "closing the topic" does not help your case here.
I might consider adding your cards anyway, but with the controversy and flame you made, it won't help much for it to be accepted. "But they start it first!" you might say, but your response that only fuel the flame more does not help your case here. Never fight fire with fire, you only burning yourself even more.

[quote="KTeknis":1wzirihk][quote="DarwisBellium92":1wzirihk]Forumblitz Hackered
Continuos Trap

Each "Forumblitz" card or effect on the field, except this card, is negated.[/quote:1wzirihk]
At first I though you were either joking or trolling with that submission. You saying that the project is "Dead Archetype" and "Does not stand up to your archetype" and you threatening to "Shut Down DB" and "closing the topic" does not help your case here.
I might consider adding your cards anyway, but with the controversy and flame you made, it won't help much for it to be accepted. "But they start it first!" you might say, but your response that only fuel the flame more does not help your case here. Never fight fire with fire, you only burning yourself even more.[/quote:1wzirihk]
Good, since you don't want my help as a cardmaker who has been creating cards from 2007 until today.
Do you know what I tell you? So much about DB will always useless fight and it will never end.
And with that, bye.

[quote="DarwisBellium92":pc3gf3h1]Good, since you don't want my help as a cardmaker who has been creating cards from 2007 until today.
Do you know what I tell you? So much about DB will always useless fight and it will never end.
And with that, bye.[/quote:pc3gf3h1]
The problem here is not the card you just made, it's your attitude that stir up flame.
There are very few people who make an anti-support for their own archetype, and even Konami rarely made very specific one nowadays. So Jedx_Ex questions the need of a specific anti-support to the project and why would someone use such cards, considering that card that counter specific cards like Call of the Grave or even GB Hunter rarely or even never sees competitive play. You could explain that anti-support cards exist despite being rarely played, like your response to Christen57, but instead, you decided to say that "this archetype does not stand up to those you created yourself" and calling the project "Dead Archetype". This is the biggest problem here. You started the flame itself by openly mocking the project.
Remember, I'm still considering to add your card to the cardlist, you did prove a good point that Anti-Support exist. The only thing stopping me from doing so is finding artwork, and the flame you caused, whatever it's intentional or not.

Damn, I missed the show :/

[quote="KTeknis":3cb0fvt5][quote="DarwisBellium92":3cb0fvt5]Good, since you don't want my help as a cardmaker who has been creating cards from 2007 until today.
Do you know what I tell you? So much about DB will always useless fight and it will never end.
And with that, bye.[/quote:3cb0fvt5]
The problem here is not the card you just made, it's your attitude that stir up flame.
There are very few people who make an anti-support for their own archetype, and even Konami rarely made very specific one nowadays. So Jedx_Ex questions the need of a specific anti-support to the project and why would someone use such cards, considering that card that counter specific cards like Call of the Grave or even GB Hunter rarely or even never sees competitive play. You could explain that anti-support cards exist despite being rarely played, like your response to Christen57, but instead, you decided to say that "this archetype does not stand up to those you created yourself" and calling the project "Dead Archetype". This is the biggest problem here. You started the flame itself by openly mocking the project.
Remember, I'm still considering to add your card to the cardlist, you did prove a good point that Anti-Support exist. The only thing stopping me from doing so is finding artwork, and the flame you caused, whatever it's intentional or not.[/quote:3cb0fvt5]
Ah but good, go get the images from the internet without the copyright license... this is not real cardmaker. The real cardmaker does not go looking for images on the internet, he creates them with his own hands.
I already have 5 illustrators willing to work for MY custom cards for 14 years that I have been doing this job.
It is with this, you have missed a golden opportunity and goodbye.

Lmao, what defines a good cardmaker? Illustrations are the least of my worries, rather making a fun, balanced and entertaining deck is what defines if you are a good cardmaker or not. And this project was madre to see how a community can work together, but I guess there will always be some bad apples.

I am not interested in your useless help and your useless words, I have more experience and I am ahead of you and, you are nothing for me.
I don't want to waste time with this toxicity, thank you and goodbye!

[quote="DarwisBellium92":285ega0l]I am not interested in your useless help and your useless words, I have more experience and I am ahead of you and, you are nothing for me.
I don't want to waste time with this toxicity, thank you and goodbye![/quote:285ega0l]
Okay CrystalMusic

[quote="Renji Asuka":3nfckh0l][quote="DarwisBellium92":3nfckh0l]I am not interested in your useless help and your useless words, I have more experience and I am ahead of you and, you are nothing for me.
I don't want to waste time with this toxicity, thank you and goodbye![/quote:3nfckh0l]
Okay CrystalMusic[/quote:3nfckh0l]
Pathetic, im not CrystalMusic, i hate CrystalMusic. -_-

[quote="DarwisBellium92":29g8xlyp]I am not interested in your useless help and your useless words, I have more experience and I am ahead of you and, you are nothing for me.
I don't want to waste time with this toxicity, thank you and goodbye![/quote:29g8xlyp]
Toxicity? You are the one ruining the fun.

[quote="DarwisBellium92":10sppsw8]
Ah but good, go get the images from the internet without the copyright license... this is not real cardmaker. The real cardmaker does not go looking for images on the internet, he creates them with his own hands.
I already have 5 illustrators willing to work for MY custom cards for 14 years that I have been doing this job.
It is with this, you have missed a golden opportunity and goodbye.[/quote:10sppsw8]
It's not a big deal to use images that aren't well-known for cards in this site. Not all of us has illustrators with us, or willing to waste our time on making art for Duelingbook. I think I'm fine with Futuregamer's advice, thanks.


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[quote="KTeknis":11j5udvz] [/quote:11j5udvz]
Now that I'm done with fun Easter, I feel like submitting my own idea for the Forumblitz project (later this week).

[quote="DarwisBellium92":3qpvev8f][quote="Renji Asuka":3qpvev8f][quote="DarwisBellium92":3qpvev8f]I am not interested in your useless help and your useless words, I have more experience and I am ahead of you and, you are nothing for me.
I don't want to waste time with this toxicity, thank you and goodbye![/quote:3qpvev8f]
Okay CrystalMusic[/quote:3qpvev8f]
Pathetic, im not CrystalMusic, i hate CrystalMusic. -_-[/quote:3qpvev8f]
Keep telling yourself that CrystalMusic

[quote="Renji Asuka":998246gn][quote="DarwisBellium92":998246gn][quote="Renji Asuka":998246gn]
Okay CrystalMusic[/quote:998246gn]
Pathetic, im not CrystalMusic, i hate CrystalMusic. -_-[/quote:998246gn]
Keep telling yourself that CrystalMusic[/quote:998246gn]
He is rather a different version of parhelia_0000, designating himself as the best custom maker while also contaminating other threads.

[quote="Lil Oldman":1h2w5isq][quote="Renji Asuka":1h2w5isq][quote="DarwisBellium92":1h2w5isq]
Pathetic, im not CrystalMusic, i hate CrystalMusic. -_-[/quote:1h2w5isq]
Keep telling yourself that CrystalMusic[/quote:1h2w5isq]
He is rather a different version of parhelia_0000, designating himself as the best custom maker while also contaminating other threads.[/quote:1h2w5isq]
Unfortunately, he also acts like CM in treating everyone else like crap while thinking he is god...

Also I do plan on altering my customs Christen57, just haven't got around to it.

[quote="Christen57":34uoyww8]
Can you make Forumblitz Barricade's effect shorter and easier to read by changing it to this?

During the Battle or End Phase: Special Summon a number of your "Forumblitz" monsters that are in your hand, GY, banished, and/or face-up Extra Deck equal to the number of "Forumblitz" cards in your Pendulum Zones, but they cannot declare an attack this turn and their effects are negated. If you have 3 or more cards in your hand, you can activate this card the turn it was Set. You cannot Summon the turn you activate this card, except "Forumblitz" monsters.[/quote:34uoyww8]
Sorry, it's been a long while since I logged onto the forums so I didn't see this. Edit is done.

And there seems to have been minor flame war here since last I was on, but I'll follow the advice given to me and stay out of it, regardless of my own opinions on the matter.

Sorry for the Necropost, but it seems that Parhellia actually deleted all his card on DB now, so I have to say this: parhelia_0000's card has been removed from the card list because the user has deleted it himself.

PS: I guess I'm nerfing Blight commander then since the card it supposed to paired with no longer exist

[quote="KTeknis":udxwa64o]Sorry for the Necropost, but it seems that Parhellia actually deleted all his card on DB now, so I have to say this: parhelia_0000's card has been removed from the card list because the user has deleted it himself.

PS: I guess I'm nerfing Blight commander then since the card it supposed to paired with no longer exist[/quote:udxwa64o]
This is why you always remake the cards so it doesn't happen.

[quote="Renji Asuka":27zchb3w]
This is why you always remake the cards so it doesn't happen.[/quote:27zchb3w]
Yeah proly I should, I just wanted to have an archetype with multiple creator in it's "author name" part. Maybe I should do another blitz like this, maybe not in the forum unless I can confirm that there's enough people who is interested.

Mekka - https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=17931563 (cir. September, 2022)
Ace Card: Advanced Mekka AM1 - “Galaxy’s Beginning”
Spam/Modern Deck. Not balanced at all. This Deck’s pilot cards attach themselves to the Xyz Mech monsters to stack effects when needed.