https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=1426204: Auriel - The Ghost Girl: DARK/Level 4/Spellcaster/Spirit/Effect, ATK/1600, DEF/1600
This card returns to your hand during the endphase of the turn in which it was summoned.
When this card is summoned: You can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Spirit" monster from your hand or deck ignoring its summon conditions. You can only activate and resolve this effect of "Auriel The Ghost Girl" Once per turn.
https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=1426222: Faythe - The Ghost Girl: LIGHT/Level 4 Spellcaster/Spirit/Effect, ATK/1600, DEF/1600
This card returns to your hand during the endphase of the turn in which it was summoned.
When this card is summoned: You can return 1 "Spirit" monster from your banished zone or GY to your hand. If this card was summoned by the effect of "Auriel The Ghost Girl" activate and resolve the following effect upon the summon of this card: Your opponent cannot attack with level/rank 5 or higher monsters during their next turn.
My first attempt at "Spirit" cards
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CrystalMusic
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My first attempt at "Spirit" cards
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CrystalMusic
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Neo_Fire_Sonic wrote:Hey guys I have a joke for you.
"Banished zone"
i got a joke for you: Edited so they cant be banished!
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LightCaster
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Well let's look at the issues:
- No PSCT so it's illegible.
- End Phase is properly capitalized
- "Banished Zone" doesn't exist.
- Free summon from hand and deck with no cost is unbalanced.
- Unbanishing something, again, mostly free with no cost is unbalanced.
- Slapping uneeded immunities "You can't banish this!" is also unbalanced.
Changes:
- You gave something an OPT. For once.
- No PSCT so it's illegible.
- End Phase is properly capitalized
- "Banished Zone" doesn't exist.
- Free summon from hand and deck with no cost is unbalanced.
- Unbanishing something, again, mostly free with no cost is unbalanced.
- Slapping uneeded immunities "You can't banish this!" is also unbalanced.
Changes:
- You gave something an OPT. For once.
>banished zone
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CrystalMusic
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LightCaster wrote:Well let's look at the issues:
- "Banished Zone" doesn't exist.
- Free summon from hand and deck with no cost is unbalanced.
Changes:
- You gave something an OPT. For once.
Umm have you even taken a look at yugioh today? most cards have a FREE SS upon Normal Summon, so dont even try to pull that on my 2 Spirit Cards!
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CrystalMusic wrote:LightCaster wrote:Well let's look at the issues:
- "Banished Zone" doesn't exist.
- Free summon from hand and deck with no cost is unbalanced.
Changes:
- You gave something an OPT. For once.
Umm have you even taken a look at yugioh today? most cards have a FREE SS upon Normal Summon, so dont even try to pull that on my 2 Spirit Cards!
That's literally like 3 archetypes you big baby.
- Six Samurais
- Fur Hires
- Salamangrear
Wanna know the difference?
Yours can't be stopped. Theirs can. Fix your fucking card and fix your fucking selective reading.
The card ideas aren't bad but I don't think this is what Spirits need tbh.
The first one would be okay, if it could only SS from your hand, and only "Ghost Girl" Monsters. I mean, Spirits are weak enough, that it might be fine even with "Spirits" instead of "Ghost Girls", but I know how good people are at abusing.
The second one is broken beyond belief. I think "If this card is Special Summoned: Target 1 "Ghost Girl" monster; add that target to your hand." is plenty strong.
The second one is broken beyond belief. I think "If this card is Special Summoned: Target 1 "Ghost Girl" monster; add that target to your hand." is plenty strong.
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