Renji's Custom Card Spotlight - Infernal Spirit Edition

[Renji Asuka]

Now before I actually reveal these simple cards I want to make 2 things clear.

I AM NOT GOING TO BALANCE THESE CARDS! These are custom cards that is just meant to show some creativity that popped into my head. Whether they are overpowered or not in your opinion is irrelevant. Custom Cards on Dueling Book is NOTORIOUS for playing absolutely broken things or people getting angry over you playing something better than they did.

Second, I am a bit rusty when it comes to making cards, so PSCT might be a bit off, but as I don't plan on actually playing these it doesn't matter as much though help is always wanted here.

That being said let the Spotlight shine!

Fury, the Infernal Spirit
Pyro/EARTH/Lv10
Ritual Monster
ATK 3800/DEF 0

You can Ritual Summon this card by sending 2 monsters whose ATK equals this monster's ATK to the GY, 1 each from your hand and Deck or by sending 3 "Fury Token" you control to the GY. As long as you control a "Fury Token" this card is unaffected by your opponent's card effects. Once per turn (Quick Effect): you can Special Summon as many "Fury Token" (Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0) as possible.

Shores, the Infernal Spirit
Pyro/EARTH/Lv8
Ritual Monster
ATK 2800/DEF 0

You can Ritual Summon this card by sending 2 monsters whose ATK equals this monster's ATK to the GY, 1 each from your hand and Deck or by sending 2 "Fury Token" you control to the GY. Your opponent cannot control more cards than you do. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Fury Token" (Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0).

Remes, the Infernal Spirit
Pyro/EARTH/Lv6
Ritual Monster
ATK 2000/DEF 0

You can Ritual Summon this card by sending 2 monsters whose ATK equals this monster's ATK to the GY, 1 each from your hand and Deck or by sending 1 "Fury Token" you control to the GY. Once per turn, you can target 1 monster in your GY; shuffle it into the deck then Special Summon 1 "Fury Token" (Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0).

Atias of the Infernal Spirit
Pyro/EARTH/Lv3
Effect Monster
ATK 1000/DEF 0

If this monster is Normal Summoned: You can add 1 "Infernal Spirit" monster from your Deck to your hand. If this card is sent to the GY by an "Infernal" card: You can Special Summon 1 "Fury Token" (Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0).

Atticus of the Infernal Spirit
Pyro/EARTH/Lv3
Effect Monster
ATK 800/DEF 0

If this monster is Normal Summoned: You can add 1 "Infernal" Spell from your Deck to your hand. If this card is sent to the GY by an "Infernal" card: You can Special Summon 1 "Fury Token"(Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0).

Gerald of the Infernal Spirit
Pyro/EARTH/Lv5
Effect Monster
ATK 2000/DEF 0

If you control an "Infernal Spirit" monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. You can send 1 "Infernal Spirit" monster you control to the GY; immediately after this effect resolves, Normal Summon 1 "Infernal Spirit" monster. If this card is sent to the GY by an "Infernal" card: You can Special Summon 1 "Fury Token"(Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0).

Gatter of the Infernal Spirit
Pyro/Earth/Lv4
Effect Monster
ATK 1800/DEF 0

If you control a "Fury Token" you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can send 1 "Infernal Spirit" monster from your hand to the GY to target 3 "Infernal Spirit" monsters in your GY; add 1 to your hand and shuffle the rest into the Deck. If this card is sent to the GY by an "Infernal" card: You can Special Summon 1 "Fury Token"(Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0).

Infernal Purgatory
Field Spell

All Pyro monsters on the field gains 200 ATK. Once per turn, you can send 1 "Infernal Spirit" monster from your deck to the GY, and if you do, Special Summon 1 "Fury Token" (Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0).

Infernal Reige
Quickplay Spell

If you control a Ritual "Infernal Spirit" monster: You can target up to 2 cards your opponent controls; negate their effects, and if you do, Special Summon 1 "Fury Token"(Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0). You can banish this card from the GY; destroy all "Fury Tokens" you control or if you control "Fury, the Infernal Spirit" destroy all cards your opponent controls.

Infernal Parade
Normal Spell

If you control "Fury Token": You can draw 1 card for each "Fury Token" you control then destroy all "Fury Tokens" you control. You can banish this card from the GY; you can Special Summon 2 "Fury Token"(Pyro/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 0).

Feel free to put your thoughts or opinions.

[greg503]

The effects to Ritual Summon are worded a little confusingly, starting like the Ritual Summon condition "You can Ritual Summon this with [Ritual Spell]", so it also doesn't read like an activated effect on first glance. I wonder why you gave Shores quite the powerful floodgate.

[Renji Asuka]

The effects to Ritual Summon are worded a little confusingly, starting like the Ritual Summon condition "You can Ritual Summon this with [Ritual Spell]", so it also doesn't read like an activated effect on first glance. I wonder why you gave Shores quite the powerful floodgate.

I wanted to make a Ritual deck that would ritual itself without needing a spell for it, so wasn't really sure how to word that, but I looked at stuff like Twin Burst and Cybernetic Horizon for that wording.

Shores effect while powerful at a glance is also not as powerful as the idea is that you would want the tokens to be on field which gives more space for your opponent to work with instead of just sitting on it as without them, you'll miss out on having access to 2 of your spells. Not talking about how you can use something like Fissure to remove the monster.

That's just what I had in mind when making it.

[greg503]

The effects to Ritual Summon are worded a little confusingly, starting like the Ritual Summon condition "You can Ritual Summon this with [Ritual Spell]", so it also doesn't read like an activated effect on first glance. I wonder why you gave Shores quite the powerful floodgate.

I wanted to make a Ritual deck that would ritual itself without needing a spell for it, so wasn't really sure how to word that, but I looked at stuff like Twin Burst and Cybernetic Horizon for that wording.

Shores effect while powerful at a glance is also not as powerful as the idea is that you would want the tokens to be on field which gives more space for your opponent to work with instead of just sitting on it as without them, you'll miss out on having access to 2 of your spells. Not talking about how you can use something like Fissure to remove the monster.

That's just what I had in mind when making it.

Megaliths ritual with their monster effects, but the ones that activate in hand discard themselves as cost.

[ominous]

Bad

[Levionia]

If you weren't looking for feedback why did you even post?

[Renji Asuka]

If you weren't looking for feedback why did you even post?

It's called sharing what I decided to create.

[ominous]

If you weren't looking for feedback why did you even post?

It's called sharing what I decided to create.

No, It's called a cry for attention.

[Levionia]

If you weren't looking for feedback why did you even post?

It's called sharing what I decided to create.

Bad psct, bad balancing, need to be reworked, if you don't want feedback you really shouldn't post it to a forum

[DarwisBellium92]

If you weren't looking for feedback why did you even post?

It's called sharing what I decided to create.

No, It's called a cry for attention.

For me, I called an useless attention whore.

[Renji Asuka]

Got to love when you make people salty af just by making a thread when all you're doing is sharing things x)

[ominous]

Got to love when you make people salty af just by making a thread when all you're doing is sharing things x)

Wow, negging, way to prove my point. If you want attention make something worth giving attention too.

[Renji Asuka]

Got to love when you make people salty af just by making a thread when all you're doing is sharing things x)

Wow, negging, way to prove my point. If you want attention make something worth giving attention too.

I'm not proving your point. People are allowed to share things on this forum my guy.

It doesn't mean that person wants attention.

[ominous]

Got to love when you make people salty af just by making a thread when all you're doing is sharing things x)

Wow, negging, way to prove my point. If you want attention make something worth giving attention too.

I'm not proving your point. People are allowed to share things on this forum my guy.

It doesn't mean that person wants attention.

No one said you can't, your reading comprehension is as bad as your card design.

[Renji Asuka]

Wow, negging, way to prove my point. If you want attention make something worth giving attention too.

I'm not proving your point. People are allowed to share things on this forum my guy.

It doesn't mean that person wants attention.

No one said you can't, your reading comprehension is as bad as your card design.

From Darwis

"For me, I called an useless attention whore."


We all know Darwis has broken English so take that with a grain of salt.

From you

"No, It's called a cry for attention."

Then you proceed be offended for some reason trying to push the idea that I'm doing this for attention, not for the sake of sharing, which is incorrect.

You don't have to like the custom cards I made, that's fine, but don't go acting as if it's for attention then turn around and give me "attention".

Sides, the more angrier you get over this thread, the more I'll create customs and share it just to see your meltdown.

[DarwisBellium92]

I'm not proving your point. People are allowed to share things on this forum my guy.

It doesn't mean that person wants attention.

No one said you can't, your reading comprehension is as bad as your card design.

From Darwis

"For me, I called an useless attention whore."


We all know Darwis has broken English so take that with a grain of salt.

Will you stop scolding me with my crappy English?

Okay, not all of us are perfect, for god's sake.

But I've had enough of your provoking/scolding me, I mind my own business, full stop.

Do you want help or advice on your custom cards? FORGET IT! You deserve nothing!

[Renji Asuka]

No one said you can't, your reading comprehension is as bad as your card design.

From Darwis

"For me, I called an useless attention whore."


We all know Darwis has broken English so take that with a grain of salt.

Will you stop scolding me with my crappy English?

Okay, not all of us are perfect, for god's sake.

But I've had enough of your provoking/scolding me, I mind my own business, full stop.

Do you want help or advice on your custom cards? FORGET IT! You deserve nothing!

Where am I scolding you? I'm not doing that and I haven't been provoking you. 90% of the time you and I interact is me trying to HELP you.

[DarwisBellium92]

From Darwis

"For me, I called an useless attention whore."


We all know Darwis has broken English so take that with a grain of salt.

Will you stop scolding me with my crappy English?

Okay, not all of us are perfect, for god's sake.

But I've had enough of your provoking/scolding me, I mind my own business, full stop.

Do you want help or advice on your custom cards? FORGET IT! You deserve nothing!

Where am I scolding you? I'm not doing that and I haven't been provoking you. 90% of the time you and I interact is me trying to HELP you.

I do not think. But it seems that you feel a certain hatred for us Italians.

End the story

[Renji Asuka]

Will you stop scolding me with my crappy English?

Okay, not all of us are perfect, for god's sake.

But I've had enough of your provoking/scolding me, I mind my own business, full stop.

Do you want help or advice on your custom cards? FORGET IT! You deserve nothing!

Where am I scolding you? I'm not doing that and I haven't been provoking you. 90% of the time you and I interact is me trying to HELP you.

I do not think. But it seems that you feel a certain hatred for us Italians.

End the story

"I do not think."

You said it not me.

Also I don't give a fuck if you're italian my guy. You can be pink with orange polka dots and I wouldn't care...but I'd suggest going to the doctor if you were cause something isn't right.

[DarwisBellium92]

Here I leave this forum, they are all exalted, toxic and do not know how to do their job as an admin.