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Post #1 by james123 » Sat Jul 24, 2021 4:24 am

https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=8405811 - Mage
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=8399070 - Demon Slayer
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=8378843 - Magic School Bus
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=8614622 - Toys/Molecule

These are 4 Decks made by my Friend speedsterduelist and I'm posting them because he always shares these decks on his Facebook rather than the forums because he might be scared or offended but, What the Hell, Christen57 told me to do it for him anyways for feedback :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

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Post #2 by Christen57 » Mon Jul 26, 2021 10:28 pm

Sharing duelingbook customs anywhere but this forum is hardly a good idea since I don't use facebook, I didn't know speedsterduelist had a facebook, and I doubt most of the other users here use or browse facebook either.

Let's take at look at these, starting with your "Mage" deck, also I'll only be reviewing cards in the main and extra deck, not the side deck.

Forbidden Memories won't work properly on duelingbook since you can't place monsters in face-down attack position. Also, locking the opponent into both 1 summon/set per turn and 1 spell/trap per turn for free is too strong, especially since you can do all your summoning/combos on your turn, then when your turn is just about over and you've assembled your board, you activate this field spell and now your opponent has an extremely hard time making a comeback since their options are so limited. It's effect to special summon from the extra deck isn't once per turn, meaning you can use this effect an infinite number of times to get infinite fusion monsters out, giving you nearly infinite xyz/link materials and whatnot.

FM MVP should have a period somewhere in it's text. It's currently worded like this:

Special Summon 1 "Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon" from your Extra Deck (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon)

when there should be a period between "Extra Deck" and "(This" as well as another period at the end before the last parentheses. Also you don't need to say "Special Summon" twice. So it should be worded like this:

Special Summon 1 "Twin-Headed Thunder Dragon" from your Extra Deck. (This is treated as a Fusion Summon.)

Take a look at Instant Fusion for an idea on how you should be wording this custom spell. Instant Fusion has a period before just before "(This is treated as a Fusion Summon" and another period like so: (This is treated as a Fusion Summon.)

The same thing goes for your cards that say "in addition to your Normal Summon/Set (you can only gain this effect once per turn)." It should say "in addition to your Normal Summon/Set. (You can only gain this effect once per turn.)" with a total of 2 periods instead of 1, with "You" being capitalized since you're starting a sentence with it, and with that last period being before that last parentheses instead of after.

Mage Sealing shouldn't have "Equip" capitalized since you're starting it right after a semi-colon and not referring to any "Equip Spell" or "Equip Card". You don't need to capitalize that word unless you're starting a sentence with it or having it right after a colon.

In case you don't know,
: is a colon, while ; is a semi-colon. Take a look at a monster like Inzektor Giga-Mantis. Notice how that monster's effect doesn't capitalize "equip" because "equip" is being used right after a semi-colon. Compare that to a monster like Truckroid, which does capitalize "Equip" but only because Truckroid is using that word right after a colon.

Also, Mage Sealing should say "1 banished monster" not "one banished monster". You need to use the number 1 here, not the word one.

For Puppet's Ritual, "equal or exceed 7" can be replaced with "equal 7 or more" which uses up less characters, making the text shorter.

Winged Trumpeter might as well be deleted since it's simply a far worse Axe of Despair, and Axe of Despair gives any equipped monster a 1000 ATK boost, not just light/fairy monsters. Also, out of the 48 monsters in this deck (still not counting the side deck), only 9 of them are light/fairy monsters that will be able to be equipped with this custom equip spell, so you really should delete that custom equip spell and use Axe of Despair instead which can work on all your monsters.

Shrine of the Mages should say "Mage" monsters gain 500 ATK/DEF, not "Mage" monsters gains 500 ATK/DEF. "Gains" should not be plural in this sentence because this sentence's subject is plural. Any time sentences like these begin with a plural subject (monsters), the predicate (gains) should be singular. You can read more about that here: https://webapps.towson.edu/ows/modulesvagr.htm

Shadow Mage Darknite should just say something like "When this card leaves the field: You can" instead of "If this card is destroyed or leaves the field do to a card effect: You can".

Ultimate Shadow Mage Nitemare's effect, "Once per turn: You can Special Summon 1 non-Effect monster from your Deck or Extra Deck, but it cannot attack this turn,. you cannot Normal Summon/Set the turn you use this effect" has both a comma and a period right next to each other, and the second "You" should be capitalized if you're starting a sentence with it.

I don't understand Mask of Shine and Dark's effect? It's supposed to protect "Mask" cards from dealing you effect damage? What "Mask" cards? I don't see any cards in this deck that would deal any effect damage, and the only Mask cards that do exist in this game that would deal effect damage are Mask of Dispel, Mask of the Accursed, and Masked Chopper, none of which are being played by anyone really.

What exactly is this deck's gameplan? It currently looks like it's trying to do too many different things at once that barely synergize with each other, if at all. What archetype needs 8 different field spells and 7 different normal monsters? You do realize that even with a field spell that lets you use your spell/trap zones as field zones, you'll still be limited to just 5 of your 8 field spells at a time, right? Why are you running a total of just 2 ritual monsters, 2 ritual spells, and no Preparation of Rites, Manju of the Ten Thousand Hands, or Pre-Preparation of Rites to help you search any of them? I can see you bricking like crazy with this deck. Too many of the cards you're running are highly situational, slow, and don't synergize with the rest of your archetype. What are Crimson Sunbird, Gaia the Dragon Champion, Man-Eating Black Shark, Mystical Sand, and Punished Eagle doing in your extra deck? Those don't synergize with any other aspect of your deck. What is B. Dragon Jungle King doing in this deck? What is Invisible Wire for? You already have a quick-play that banishes monsters without targeting, so why do you need another single monster removal in the form of a situational trap? Who runs both Dark Magician and Red-Eyes Black Dragon but no Red-Eyes Fusion, Red-Eyes Dark Dragoon, or Predaplant Verte Anaconda?

I would fix all of the above grammar errors I pointed out, remove/delete all of this deck's traps, equip spells, fusion customs/cards, and normal monsters, keeping this archetype focused on utilizing the "Mage" monsters, their listed field spells, as well as the rituals. Adding unnecessary fusions and normal monsters to the mix instead of better cards and searchers like the aforementioned Pre-Preparation of Rites makes this deck even more inconsistent than it needs to be. The fusion monsters should all be replaced with generic link monsters or something. Rank 4s and Rank 8s may also be an option since the archetype uses lots of level 4 and 8 monsters. The archetype needs a more focused gameplan and shouldn't be trying to do too many different things at once that don't synergize with each other. I would also maybe give the archetype the ability to search a specific but fairly weak card like Scroll of Bewitchment for free which can change the attribute of any monster it's equipped to to anything else, allowing the archetype to have an easier time getting out it's monsters that requiring sacrifices of specific attributes to special summon.

Alternatively, you can delete/remove all of the ritual-based cards since those seem to synergize with your archetype even than than the fusion-based cards. Having both of those along with the Mage stuff, as well as the situational traps and equip spell, makes the deck too inconsistent.

Now for the Demon Slayer archetype.

Candyce, the Sweet Tooth Fairy shouldn't capitalize the word "draw" in "You can Draw 2 cards". "Draw" should be lower case since you aren't starting a sentence with it or having it right after a semi-colon or quotation mark. Also, there should be a colon right after "(Quick Effect)" like so: (Quick Effect):

In fact, that effect is a trigger effect and not an actual quick effect, so there's no need for (Quick Effect) to be there at all. You can just say Once per turn, if your opponent Special Summons a monster: You can Special Summon 1 "Sweet Tooth" monster from your hand. without including "Quick Effect" anywhere in there.

Candydee, The Sweet Tooth Fairy doesn't need a comma between "Summoned" and "while". That effect can begin with If this card is Summoned while you control a "Sweet Tooth" monster: without including that comma.

For Candylia, The Sweet Tooth Princess, the way you specify if her first effect is or isn't an activated effect is by using either a colon and no parentheses (if her effect is activated) or a comma and parentheses (if her effect isn't activated). In order words, you should say either:

If you control a Level 4 Fairy or Machine monster other than "Candylia, The Sweet Tooth Princess", you can Special Summon this card (from your hand).

or

If you control a Level 4 Fairy or Machine monster other than "Candylia, The Sweet Tooth Princess": You can Special Summon this card from your hand.

but not:

If you control a Level 4 Fairy or Machine monster other than "Candylia, The Sweet Tooth Princess", you can Special Summon this card from your hand.

or

If you control a Level 4 Fairy or Machine monster other than "Candylia, The Sweet Tooth Princess": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand).

Look at Junk Forward and Watch Cat, both of which special summon themselves from the hand if you control no monsters, but one of them uses a comma and parentheses to indicate it's not an activated effect, while the other uses a colon and no parentheses to indicate it's an activated effect, and even if an effect like this doesn't use a comma, it will still use parentheses to indicate it's not an activated effect, in the case of something like Gilasaurus.

For Flame Hashira Rengoku, the "if" in "if this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle" should be capitalized since you're starting a sentence with it, the "if" in "Once per turn, If this is the only monster you control" should not be capitalized since you're not starting a sentence with it or having it right after a colon, the "(Quick Effect) Once per turn" should be swapped so it says "Once per turn (Quick Effect):" with the "Once per turn" coming first and "Quick Effect" coming second, and there should be a colon right after (Quick Effect) so it's (Quick Effect):. In fact, that entire condition should be Once per turn, if this is the only monster you control (Quick Effect): not "(Quick Effect) Once per turn, If this is the only monster you control". The same thing goes for the rest of the cards in this archetype with this similar type of condition.

Insect Hashira Shinobu should have a colon, instead of a comma, between "by battle" and "You can add" if it's going to be an activated effect.

Kamado Ally Inosuke doesn't need to include "Card" in it's effect, "If this card battles: You can destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card your opponent controls." You can just say "You can destroy 1 Spell/Trap your opponent controls" without including "card" there.

Koro and Sensei aren't 2 separate words. They're 1 single word, since that's the character's name, Korosensei, not Koro for the first name and Sensei for the last name. https://ansatsukyoshitsu.fandom.com/wiki/Korosensei

Laffey doesn't need "(Quick Effect)" anywhere in it's text since none of it's effects are quick effects. One of them is a trigger effect while the other is an ignition effect. Neither of these are quick effects.

Smol Nezuko's stats are going to be tedious keeping track off, requiring you to keep track of both it's level, it's original level, as well as the difference, and then on top of that you have to multiply that difference by 300 instead of an easier number like 100, 200, or 500. I would maybe make it like an F.A. monster where it's ATK/DEF are equal to it's level x 200 or 500 or something.

Sweet Tooth Refreshments is a strictly better Living Fossil as it doesn't negate whatever it revives, nor does it banish whatever it revives upon either of them leaving the field. Giant Worm Attack looks like a strictly better Trap Hole of Spikes as it deals damage equal to the full ATK instead of half, and also gains you life equal to the DEF.

The Nine Hashira gives too many protections to too many of your cards. I would remove the effect protecting itself at least.

Candylilah, The Sweet Tooth Queen is a strictly better Fairy Cheer Girl requiring any level 4 monster instead of just fairies, drawing you at least 2 cards instead of just 1, having more ATK and DEF, as well as not being once per turn.

Lawyer X is too generic and abusable, especially in archetypes that like to discard their own cards such as the Dark World and Danger! archetypes. On top of that, it punishes the opponent for trying to use a hand trap to disrupt you by giving you a free search when that happens.

Pendulum Monsters that are also xyz/link monsters should say "Pendulum Summon this face-up card in your Extra Deck" and not "Pendulum Summon this card from your face-up Extra Deck". Also, the capitalized words "Banish" and "Number" in the pendulum/link monster's monster effect don't need to be capitalized since you're not starting a sentence with either of them or having either of them after a colon or in a quote.

Twisted Metal Carnival Of Carnage has a grammar error where it says "Onceper turn; you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to the highest ATK among the monsters this card currently points to." It should say "Once per turn: You can inflict damage to your opponent equal to the highest ATK among the monsters this card points to." "Once" and "per" are 2 separate words, not 1 single word, and there should be a colon right after "Once per turn" instead of a semi-colon since you're describing a condition.

As for this deck itself, why do you have 2 separate archetypes mashed together that hardly synergize with each other? It's probably better that you focus on one in this deck, only focusing on 2 if they both synergize. Also too many of the cards in this archetype either generate too much advantage or give too much free protection, with the field spell having full protection from all other effects while you control monsters that each protect themselves from attack and targeting, along with a trap that protects your monsters and itself from all attacks and targeting by anything from the opponent. That's too much.

Also, the words "The," "A," and "Of" in each of your custom cards' names with any of these words each should be lower case unless it's at the beginning of the name, at the end of the name, a part of another word, or right before/after a dash or colon. The names I'm referring to are:
  • Candyce, The Sweet Tooth Fairy
  • Candydee, The Sweet Tooth Fairy
  • Candylia, The Sweet Tooth Princess
  • Koro Sensei, The Extraterrestrial Teacher
  • An Apple A Day
  • Candylilah, The Sweet Tooth Queen
  • Candyrine, The Sweet Tooth Knight
  • Number 172: Candyline, The Sweet Tooth Sprite
  • Twisted Metal Carnival Of Carnage

Each of the "The"s and "A"s and "Of"s in these names should all be lower case, since none of them are beginning/ending the name or coming right after or before a colon or dash. Look at the entire Plunder Patroll, Timelord, Dracoslayer, Dracoverlord, Kaiju, True Draco, and Ogdoadic archetypes. See how each of those archetypes' monsters have the "The" in their names lower case. See how Ordeal of a Traveler has the "of" and "a" both lowercase because it's name neither begins nor ends with either of those words or has them right after or before a colon or dash.

Now for the Magic School Bus archetype.

Remember what I said earlier about how words like "The" need to be lower case if they're not starting/ending the name or coming right before/after a dash or colon? That applies to Dracie, The Dragon Queen. This "The" is this name should be lower case.

For MSB - Airplane Bus, you can say your Warrior "MSB" monsters can attack directly instead of Warrior "MSB" monsters you control can attack your opponent directly. Any time you have an effect giving all your monsters the ability to attack directly, the wording can always be "your monsters can attack directly" instead of "monsters you control can attack your opponent directly". Effects that let a monster attack directly don't need to specifically mention that they allow it to attack "your opponent" directly. You can just say "can attack directly" instead of "can attack your opponent directly" without including the "your opponent" part since any of your monsters attacking directly is always going to be attacking the opponent by default, and nothing else. You also don't need to describe them as "monsters you control" here since any of your monsters attacking directly is always going to be a monster you control. You can keep the effect shorter by just describing them as "your monsters" instead of "monsters you control".

The same thing goes for MSB - Alligator Bus. You don't need to say If a Warrior "MSB" monster you control attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict double Piercing Battle Damage. You can say If your Warrior "MSB" monster attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict double piercing battle damage. "Piercing battle damage" doesn't need to be capitalized here since you aren't starting a sentence with it. You might still that phrase capitalized on some very old cards, but Konami no longer does that. https://yugipedia.com/wiki/Problem-Solving_Card_Text#Changes

MSB - Arnold Perlstein's effect doesn't need to have "Return" capitalized since you're not starting a sentence with it or having it after a colon. It should have a colon, instead of a semi-colon, between "Battle Phase" and "Special Summon both" since that's a condition, not a cost. Also, it should special summon a monster with the same name as whatever returned to the hand, instead of the same card, because then it could lead to confusion where you return that monster to the hand, then the opponent plays something like Madolche Nights to shuffle that returned monster back into the deck, and then neither of you will know if it was the same returned card or a different copy.

MSB - Bear Bus doesn't need to have "Place" capitalized since you're not starting a sentence with it. Also you can have it just say "Field Zone" instead of "Field Spell Zone". You don't need to include "Spell" there. The same thing goes for MSB - Disk Bus, MSB - Spaceship Bus, and Bus, Do Your Stuff! Also, MSB - Spaceship Bus says "you Field Spell Zone" instead of "your Field Spell Zone".

Speaking of Bus, Do Your Stuff! not only is it missing a period at the very end, but also you should use actual bullet points instead of whatever this is:

Activate 1 of the following effects:
.Banish 1 "The Magic School Bus" You control; Special Summon 1 Machine "MSB" monster from your hand or GY.
.Return 1 Machine "MSB" monster you control to the hand; Place 1 of your banished "The Magic School Bus" in your Field Spell Zone.
You can only use each effect of "Bus, Do You Stuff!" once per turn


Since you have no effects on that spell besides the "Activate 1 of the following effects" effect, you can replace "the following effects:" with "these effects." It's shorter that way. Also, the "You" in Banish 1 "The Magic School Bus" You control doesn't need to be capitalized since you aren't starting a sentence with it.

This is how you fix it's entire effect:

Activate 1 of these effects.
● Banish 1 "The Magic School Bus" you control; Special Summon 1 Machine "MSB" monster from your hand or GY.
● Return 1 Machine "MSB" monster you control to the hand; place 1 of your banished "The Magic School Bus" in your Field Zone.
You can only activate 1 "Bus, Do You Stuff!" per turn.


The "● Banish 1" and "● Return 1" effects are considered to be all 1 single effect, something you're just specifically choosing, so you can't refer to them as "each effect". You need to use the "You can only activate 1 "" per turn" clause, since this is a quick-play spell, and not the "You can only use each effect of "" per turn" clause.

MSB - Ralphie Tennelli doesn't need to have "Negate" capitalized. You're not starting a sentence with "Negate".

MSB - Wanda Li doesn't need to have "Draw" capitalized since you aren't starting a sentence with that word.

Don't make Schrodinger's Dungeon, or any card for that matter, refer to any effects as "1st and 2nd effects" or anything like that. For Schrodinger's Dungeon, just make it say something like:

Your opponent cannot Summon monsters with the same original name as a monster you control. You can only use each of the following effects of "Schrodinger's Dungeon" once per turn.
● You can target 1 monster in your GY; Special Summon 1 monster from your hand or Deck with the same original name as that target.
● You can target 1 monster you control and banish 1 monster from your GY with its same original name; draw 2 cards.
● You can target 1 monster in your GY and 1 of your banished monsters with its same original name; send this card to the GY, then Special Summon both targets.


Also, copy this bullet point ● and save it somewhere so you have quick and easy access to it. These are what you should be using when listing off multiple effects like before, not periods, dashes, slashes, hyphens, asterisks, or anything else. Just bullet points, like the ones Ash Blossom & Joyous Spring uses.

According To My Research should be once per turn or something, not once per "Phase," especially since it's pretty powerful being able to activate itself from the hand and negate anything.

Down To The Very Last Bit doesn't need to have "Cards" capitalized since you aren't starting a sentence with it, nor are you using it to describe "Monster Card" or "Spell/Trap Card" or anything like that.

Also, these 2 traps should have the "To"s and "The"s in their names lower case, like how Back to the Front has the "To" and "The" in it's name lower case. Remember, you're not starting or ending the name with either of these 2 words or having either of these 2 words right before or after a colon or dash, so they should be lower case.

Beholder simply being able to be fusion summoned using any "2+ monsters with different names" without any other restrictions makes it broken, even without any of the other bonus effects it has, since we have Super Polymerization running around at 3.

As of 2021, fusion monsters that can special summon themselves through contact fusion don't need to include phrases like "Special Summoned from your Extra Deck" or "You do not use Polymerization" or anything like that in their summoning requirement. Konami has stopped including those phrases for a while now in their newer fusion monsters since those phrases take up space and because you don't need to explicitly mention that you can't use Polymerization anymore. MSB - Molly Cule's summoning condition doesn't need to be Must first be Fusion Summoned, or Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by Tributing the above monsters you control (in which case, you do not use "Polymerization"). It can simply be "Must first be Fusion Summoned, or Special Summoned by Tributing the above monsters you control" period, without including any "from your Extra Deck" or "no Polymerization" clauses. Also, "Can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each during your Battle Phase" can be rewritten as "Can attack all your opponent's monsters once each". There's no need to describe them as monsters "your opponent controls" since all monsters will only be able to attack opposing monsters by default. A monster will never be able to attack another card in the spell/trap zone, hand, graveyard, or anywhere else besides the monster zones, so including "your opponent controls" here isn't necessary. You also don't need to say "during your Battle Phase" here. Obviously anything involving attacking is going to be limited to the battle phase by default, and no other phase, so there's no need to reiterate that this is a battle phase-only thing.

MSB - Fiona Frizzle is missing a period at the very end of her text. Also, "cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects" can be rewritten as "cannot be destroyed by battle or effects" without the need for that "card" word. Look at how Trickstar Foxglove Witch says "battle or effect" instead of "battle or card effect".

Same thing goes for Tarrasque. You can say "Cannot be destroyed by effects" instead of "Cannot be destroyed by card effects". "Card" doesn't need to be included here, not anymore at least.

The Toy Molecule archetype/deck seems to have the least amount of issues out of these 4 decks you presented, meaning I can make this one quick.

"Spell/Trap Zone" should be "Spell & Trap Zone" with the special "&" symbol instead of the "/" symbol.

When referring to spell cards and field spell cards, you don't need to include "card". You can just say "as a Spell" and "Send 2 Field Spells from your hand or field to the GY".

World Fusion can be rewritten as "Send 2 Field Spells from your hand and/or field to the GY; Special Summon 1 Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck that lists both sent cards. (This is treated as a Fusion Summon.)" The word "monster" should have been capitalized here since you're referring to a Fusion Monster. You always capitalize that word if you're referring to something like Normal, Effect, Ritual, Fusion, Synchro, Xyz, Pendulum, or Link Monster. "Mentions" can be replaced with "lists," a shorter word that means pretty much the same thing. "Card text" doesn't need to be included since anything that "lists" anything else is always by default going to list that in some part of the card text. The last period should be within the parentheses, not outside.

For Molecular Gathering, instead of saying "Activate this card by declaring 1 Attribute; Until the end of the turn, monsters you currently control gain," you can say "Declare 1 Attribute; this turn, monsters you currently control gain". It's a normal trap, so you don't need to specify "Activate this card by doing X" or anything like that. Instead of "Until the end of the turn," you can say "this turn". Also, nothing right after the semi-colon needs capitalization here.

Toy Cannon doesn't need to have "Destroy" capitalized since you're not starting a sentence with it. Also it's last effect needs to be rewritten so it's less confusing, like so:

If you Tribute a monster from your Spell & Trap Zone to activate this effect: Special Summon it during the End Phase.

or something else like that.

Susanoomon protecting itself from leaving the field, destruction, and dark monsters is too much. Some of those protections need to be toned down. The rest of the fusion monsters have words/phrases that are either capitalized when they shouldn't be, or not capitalized when they should be:
  • Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the highest original ATK among the monsters you used as Material for this card's Summon. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict Piercing Battle Damage. If this card is destroyed: you can Special Summon up to 3 non-Fusion "Molecular" monsters from your GY.
  • You can banish 1 monster from your GY with the same Attribute as that opponent's monster; Negate that effect, and if you do, banish that opponent's monster, also you cannot banish monsters with that same attribute for the rest of this turn.
  • You can target 1 other "Toy" or "Molecular" monster you control; It can attack your opponent directly this turn.
  • If this card battles a FIRE monster, its ATK/DEF is doubled during Damage Calculation only.

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Post #3 by james123 » Mon Jul 26, 2021 10:52 pm

Christen57 wrote:Forbidden Memories won't work properly on duelingbook since you can't place monsters in face-down attack position.


Well then, go make a Script to do that said action

Christen57 wrote:Koro and Sensei aren't 2 separate words. They're 1 single word, since that's the character's name, Korosensei, not Koro for the first name and Sensei for the last name. https://ansatsukyoshitsu.fandom.com/wiki/Korosensei


if you played Tomodachi Life and have Korosensei as one of your Miis, I bet you'll have it like "Koro" for his First name and 'Sensei" for his last name + "Korosensei" for his Nickname

Christen57 wrote:Speaking of Bus, Do Your Stuff! not only is it missing a period at the very end, but also you should use actual bullet points instead of whatever this is:

Activate 1 of the following effects:
.Banish 1 "The Magic School Bus" You control; Special Summon 1 Machine "MSB" monster from your hand or GY.
.Return 1 Machine "MSB" monster you control to the hand; Place 1 of your banished "The Magic School Bus" in your Field Spell Zone.
You can only use each effect of "Bus, Do You Stuff!" once per turn

That's because of a glitch on DB when the Site is updated any Black Bullet points on a card made Previously is replaced by Question marks
Yeah, I bet you'll tell speedster to fixes his mistakes when He logs on
P.S. I have beholder in the Hyper Psychic Deck to make use of Greater Poly


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Post #5 by Christen57 » Tue Jul 27, 2021 2:40 am

james123 wrote:
Christen57 wrote:Forbidden Memories won't work properly on duelingbook since you can't place monsters in face-down attack position.


Well then, go make a Script to do that said action

Christen57 wrote:Koro and Sensei aren't 2 separate words. They're 1 single word, since that's the character's name, Korosensei, not Koro for the first name and Sensei for the last name. https://ansatsukyoshitsu.fandom.com/wiki/Korosensei


if you played Tomodachi Life and have Korosensei as one of your Miis, I bet you'll have it like "Koro" for his First name and 'Sensei" for his last name + "Korosensei" for his Nickname

Christen57 wrote:Speaking of Bus, Do Your Stuff! not only is it missing a period at the very end, but also you should use actual bullet points instead of whatever this is:

Activate 1 of the following effects:
.Banish 1 "The Magic School Bus" You control; Special Summon 1 Machine "MSB" monster from your hand or GY.
.Return 1 Machine "MSB" monster you control to the hand; Place 1 of your banished "The Magic School Bus" in your Field Spell Zone.
You can only use each effect of "Bus, Do You Stuff!" once per turn

That's because of a glitch on DB when the Site is updated any Black Bullet points on a card made Previously is replaced by Question marks
Yeah, I bet you'll tell speedster to fixes his mistakes when He logs on
P.S. I have beholder in the Hyper Psychic Deck to make use of Greater Poly


I'm a bit exhausted at the moment from reviewing those 4 decks so let's take this one step at a time and fix them up first before we jump to 8 more decks.

We're not going to be setting monsters in face-down attack position any time soon, so that effect saying players can do so needs to go.

Also I do remember bullet points would glitch and change to question marks, but periods? I don't think that ever happened. Either way, I'm sure that glitch was fixed now because I haven't experienced it in months.

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Post #6 by james123 » Wed Sep 01, 2021 9:19 pm

Christen57 wrote:
james123 wrote:
Christen57 wrote:Forbidden Memories won't work properly on duelingbook since you can't place monsters in face-down attack position.


Well then, go make a Script to do that said action

Christen57 wrote:Koro and Sensei aren't 2 separate words. They're 1 single word, since that's the character's name, Korosensei, not Koro for the first name and Sensei for the last name. https://ansatsukyoshitsu.fandom.com/wiki/Korosensei


if you played Tomodachi Life and have Korosensei as one of your Miis, I bet you'll have it like "Koro" for his First name and 'Sensei" for his last name + "Korosensei" for his Nickname

Christen57 wrote:Speaking of Bus, Do Your Stuff! not only is it missing a period at the very end, but also you should use actual bullet points instead of whatever this is:

Activate 1 of the following effects:
.Banish 1 "The Magic School Bus" You control; Special Summon 1 Machine "MSB" monster from your hand or GY.
.Return 1 Machine "MSB" monster you control to the hand; Place 1 of your banished "The Magic School Bus" in your Field Spell Zone.
You can only use each effect of "Bus, Do You Stuff!" once per turn

That's because of a glitch on DB when the Site is updated any Black Bullet points on a card made Previously is replaced by Question marks
Yeah, I bet you'll tell speedster to fixes his mistakes when He logs on
P.S. I have beholder in the Hyper Psychic Deck to make use of Greater Poly


I'm a bit exhausted at the moment from reviewing those 4 decks so let's take this one step at a time and fix them up first before we jump to 8 more decks.

We're not going to be setting monsters in face-down attack position any time soon, so that effect saying players can do so needs to go.
Also I do remember bullet points would glitch and change to question marks, but periods? I don't think that ever happened. Either way, I'm sure that glitch was fixed now because I haven't experienced it in months.

I PM'd him like a month or something ago to fix his cards but he says you're just nitpicking which means he's keeping his the same as possible meaning he claims his effects are "Balanced"


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