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Voltron Archetype

Post #1 by Zack223 » Fri Feb 19, 2021 3:59 pm

Hi, this is my first post on any type of forum, but I wanted to get feedback on my customs. If they're broken and op, I'd appreciate advice on how to nerf them. I also think there are cards that can easily break it, but not too sure.

Theme:
They're based around space and the galaxy and a Anime called Voltron I'm using Netfilx's as an Exmaple https://www.google.com/search?q=Voltron itself also there a control Deck I know I said control but there main Deck also has it bit of combo in it but its very flexible if this where a real Deck it could just be splash in to any kind of mid-range Deck like Orcust, and control Decks like Eldlich, Sky Strikers, Invoked, Shaddoll, Dogmatika those are just some of the Decks that could just work with this Deck This Deck can be an engine also let me know what kind if real Decks that could work as engines for this Archetype.

Compatible Decks and Types: Mid-range and Control Decks like.
Orcust
Sky Striker
Eldlich
Invoked
Shaddoll
Dogmatika
(Phantom knight + ABC-Dragon Buster with Dragoon) Dead without Union Carrier

The Archetype:
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7695239

The Deck Builds:
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7478800 (Voltron Sky Striker) 1st Version
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7497210 (Voltron Sky Striker) 2nd Version
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7445662 (Voltron Eldlich)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7474874 (Voltron Shaddoll Dogmatika)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7519528 (Voltron Control) 1st Version
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7686735 (Voltron Control) 2nd Version
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7481502 (Voltron with Phantom knight + ABC-Dragon Buster with Dragoon)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7415239 (Orcust Voltron) 1st Version
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7497471 (Voltron Orcust) 2nd Version
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7716420 (Voltron Lair Control)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7721513 (Voltron Lair Law Control)

A replay with the Deck's Actions:
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-26101966 (Win) 2/3 Games (Voltron Control)
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-25931950 (Win) 1 Game (Voltron Sky Striker)
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-25962434 (Win) 1 Game (Voltron with PK + ABC with Dragoon)
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-25987387 (Win) 1 Game (Voltron Orcust)
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-25988773 (Win) 1 Game (Voltron Orcust)
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-26862134 (Win) 1 Game (Voltron Lair Control)
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-26864381 (Win) 1 Game (Voltron Lair Control)
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-26896874 (Win) 1 Game (Voltron Lair Law Control)
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-26927017 (Win) and the (Latest and Newest) 1 Game (Voltron Lair Law Control)

Me using Voltron in a Twitch Stream playing against a Yu-gi-oh twitch streamer
https://www.twitch.tv/videos/941729563
https://www.twitch.tv/videos/950269049

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Hope ya'all have Good day and see ya later!
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Post #2 by Rocket2 » Sat Feb 20, 2021 1:25 am

WTF?! I watched the only working replay before I start analysis your deck, but "Atlantean draw"!? You might not made it, but you did run a complete broken card. That alone gave me a very bad first impression, but its get worst. Then I saw you play your "Voltron Prince Lotor", "Voltron Still-Explosion" & "Bolt Bot Voltron Loin - Black", and when the replay was over, I was like, well this is the shortest analysis I done. 100% Broken, cheap, dirty, and very very dumb. Even before I watched the replay, when I read the archetype can be splash in many of those abused decks, I know I not going to like it.

FAIL! My advices, go look at real printed archetype, and see how's konami try (but sometime fails) to balance them. Also, read this guide. It help, but don't follow blindly because some parts are wrong & very biased.
https://futuregamer-yugioh.blogspot.com/2020/09/the-pros-guide-to-custom-cards-create.html

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Post #3 by Zack223 » Sat Feb 20, 2021 4:11 am

Well Thanks for Reviewing it and thanks for the helpful advice
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Post #4 by james123 » Sat Feb 20, 2021 1:49 pm

My friend made some Voltron cards before based on the 80's Show
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7125829

Btw, the Classic Voltron is actually made out of 2 other Animes called "Beast King GoLion" and "Armored Fleet Dairugger XV".
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Post #5 by james123 » Sat Feb 20, 2021 8:22 pm

Zack223 wrote:Hi, this is my first post on any type of forum, but I wanted to get feedback on my customs. If they're broken and op, I'd appreciate advice on how to nerf them. I also think there are cards that can easily break it, but not too sure.

Theme:
They're based around space and the galaxy and a Anime called Voltron I'm using Netfilx's as an Exmaple https://www.google.com/search?q=Voltron ... AHoECAEQAA itself also there a control Deck I know I said control but there main Deck also has it bit of combo in it but its very flexible if this where a real Deck it could just be splash in to any kind of mid-range Deck like Orcust, and control Decks like Eldlich, Sky Strikers, Invoked, Shaddoll, Dogmatika those are just some of the Decks that could just work with this Deck This Deck can be an engine also let me know what kind if real Decks that could work as engines for this Archetype.

Compatible Decks and Types: Mid-range and Control Decks like.
Orcust
Sky Striker
Eldlich
Invoked
Shaddoll
Dogmatika
(Phantom knight + ABC-Dragon Buster with Dragoon)

The Deck:
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7391118


A replay with the deck's main midrange:
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-25755100 (Win) - (Outdated)/Don't watch this one!
https://www.duelingbook.com/replay?id=731601-25931950 (Win) and the (Latest and Newest) one

Can you make them Public

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Post #6 by Levionia » Sun Feb 21, 2021 1:45 am

Wow... a LOT of issues. First off, why TF do they all have quick effects... HUGE red flag. Secondly, this exact concept has already been done, and better, with Super Quants.
Some other HUGE red flags:
"the equipped monster cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects, also your opponent cannot target it with card effects." on your SEARCHABLE equip... No.
"of monsters attached by this effect. Neither player can activate cards or effects in response to this card's activation"
Quickplay Spell Speed 4 Boss mosnter spamming machine that lets you plus off nothing... NO.
your OMNI-COUNTER TRAP... which is SEARCHABLE... that stops you from using cards and effects of the card negated for the rest of the turn... banishes... AND stops your opponent from SS'ing during their turn...
and your final counter trap SHUFFLES THE OPPONENTS HAND INTO DECK... REVEALS AND BANISHES TARGETS FROM THE EXTRA... HELL NO.

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Post #7 by Levionia » Sun Feb 21, 2021 1:45 am

Wow... a LOT of issues. First off, why TF do they all have quick effects... HUGE red flag. Secondly, this exact concept has already been done, and better, with Super Quants.
Some other HUGE red flags:
"the equipped monster cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects, also your opponent cannot target it with card effects." on your SEARCHABLE equip... No.
"of monsters attached by this effect. Neither player can activate cards or effects in response to this card's activation"
Quickplay Spell Speed 4 Boss mosnter spamming machine that lets you plus off nothing... NO.
your OMNI-COUNTER TRAP... which is SEARCHABLE... that stops you from using cards and effects of the card negated for the rest of the turn... banishes... AND stops your opponent from SS'ing during their turn...
and your final counter trap SHUFFLES THE OPPONENTS HAND INTO DECK... REVEALS AND BANISHES TARGETS FROM THE EXTRA... HELL NO.

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Post #8 by Levionia » Sun Feb 21, 2021 1:47 am

Your customs are just a poor mans Super Quants... With wildly unbalanced effects... Poor Card art... you need to take this back to the drawing board.

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Post #9 by KTeknis » Sun Feb 21, 2021 1:48 am

Levionia wrote:Wow... a LOT of issues. First off, why TF do they all have quick effects... HUGE red flag. Secondly, this exact concept has already been done, and better, with Super Quants.
Some other HUGE red flags:
"the equipped monster cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects, also your opponent cannot target it with card effects." on your SEARCHABLE equip... No.
"of monsters attached by this effect. Neither player can activate cards or effects in response to this card's activation"
Quickplay Spell Speed 4 Boss mosnter spamming machine that lets you plus off nothing... NO.
your OMNI-COUNTER TRAP... which is SEARCHABLE... that stops you from using cards and effects of the card negated for the rest of the turn... banishes... AND stops your opponent from SS'ing during their turn...
and your final counter trap SHUFFLES THE OPPONENTS HAND INTO DECK... REVEALS AND BANISHES TARGETS FROM THE EXTRA... HELL NO.

Levionia, you accidentally double posted. (maybe)
But it's good to see you still have your fair share of sense of balance.
I have interest in badly designed custom cards.
You saw these cards as terrible, I saw them as ideas.

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Post #10 by 777c » Thu Mar 04, 2021 2:41 pm

This is a badly designed deck, as it is a worse Super Quants.

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Post #11 by parhelia_0000 » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:21 pm

Don't listen to these guys. These custom card reviewers lost my respect long ago after how Rocket2 spewed racist remarks against me.

Keep making those amazing custom cards, Zack223. Don't let others gatekeep you from doing what you want.

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Post #12 by KTeknis » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:25 pm

parhelia_0000 wrote:Don't listen to these guys. These custom card reviewers lost my respect long ago after how Rocket2 spewed racist remarks against me.

Keep making those amazing custom cards, Zack223. Don't let others gatekeep you from doing what you want.

You're doing it again. DO NOT SET OTHER THREAD ON FIRE JUST TO MAKE YOUR VOICE HEARD. And also, just because Rocket2 is actively attacking you, does not mean every single card critic does. Futuregamer for example just leave after 2 post and does not bother you again.
I have interest in badly designed custom cards.
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Post #13 by parhelia_0000 » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:27 pm

KTeknis wrote:
parhelia_0000 wrote:Don't listen to these guys. These custom card reviewers lost my respect long ago after how Rocket2 spewed racist remarks against me.

Keep making those amazing custom cards, Zack223. Don't let others gatekeep you from doing what you want.

You're doing it again. DO NOT SET OTHER THREAD ON FIRE JUST TO MAKE YOUR VOICE HEARD. And also, just because Rocket2 is actively attacking you, does not mean every single card critic does. Futuregamer for example just leave after 2 post and does not bother you again.

Perhaps it's for the best that I defame the custom card reviewers back, if it means getting staff members to recognize how racist reviewers like Rocket2 have been towards me.

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Post #14 by KTeknis » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:29 pm

parhelia_0000 wrote:
KTeknis wrote:
parhelia_0000 wrote:Don't listen to these guys. These custom card reviewers lost my respect long ago after how Rocket2 spewed racist remarks against me.

Keep making those amazing custom cards, Zack223. Don't let others gatekeep you from doing what you want.

You're doing it again. DO NOT SET OTHER THREAD ON FIRE JUST TO MAKE YOUR VOICE HEARD. And also, just because Rocket2 is actively attacking you, does not mean every single card critic does. Futuregamer for example just leave after 2 post and does not bother you again.

Perhaps it's for the best that I defame the custom card reviewers back, if it means getting staff members to recognize how racist reviewers like Rocket2 have been towards me.

Just like Saraak said: Please don't generalize. Not all of us are Rocket2 and want the same things as them. A prime example being Christen57 and his constructive criticism, of which I disagree with only a few parts of.

The only one who cyberbullied is him, not us. Everyone other than Rocket2 wants this to just stop and deescalate.
I have interest in badly designed custom cards.
You saw these cards as terrible, I saw them as ideas.

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Post #15 by parhelia_0000 » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:31 pm

KTeknis wrote:
parhelia_0000 wrote:
KTeknis wrote:You're doing it again. DO NOT SET OTHER THREAD ON FIRE JUST TO MAKE YOUR VOICE HEARD. And also, just because Rocket2 is actively attacking you, does not mean every single card critic does. Futuregamer for example just leave after 2 post and does not bother you again.

Perhaps it's for the best that I defame the custom card reviewers back, if it means getting staff members to recognize how racist reviewers like Rocket2 have been towards me.

Just like Saraak said: Please don't generalize. Not all of us are Rocket2 and want the same things as them. A prime example being Christen57 and his constructive criticism, of which I disagree with only a few parts of.

The only one who cyberbullied is him, not us. Everyone other than Rocket2 wants this to just stop and deescalate.

Rocket2 has sworn to attack me in the forums wherever I'm being active. Until Rocket2 finally stops, this is my way of revenge against custom card reviewers who disrespected me with racist comments.

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Post #16 by KTeknis » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:34 pm

parhelia_0000 wrote:
KTeknis wrote:
parhelia_0000 wrote:Perhaps it's for the best that I defame the custom card reviewers back, if it means getting staff members to recognize how racist reviewers like Rocket2 have been towards me.

Just like Saraak said: Please don't generalize. Not all of us are Rocket2 and want the same things as them. A prime example being Christen57 and his constructive criticism, of which I disagree with only a few parts of.

The only one who cyberbullied is him, not us. Everyone other than Rocket2 wants this to just stop and deescalate.

Rocket2 has sworn to attack me in the forums wherever I'm being active. Until Rocket2 finally stops, this is my way of revenge against custom card reviewers who disrespected me with racist comments.

If you wanted to swore revenge, swore revenge on Rocket2, not all Custom Card Reviewer. The rest of them simply no longer care the moment you choose not to listen. Which is actually a good move btw.
I have interest in badly designed custom cards.
You saw these cards as terrible, I saw them as ideas.

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Post #17 by parhelia_0000 » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:35 pm

KTeknis wrote:
parhelia_0000 wrote:
KTeknis wrote:Just like Saraak said: Please don't generalize. Not all of us are Rocket2 and want the same things as them. A prime example being Christen57 and his constructive criticism, of which I disagree with only a few parts of.

The only one who cyberbullied is him, not us. Everyone other than Rocket2 wants this to just stop and deescalate.

Rocket2 has sworn to attack me in the forums wherever I'm being active. Until Rocket2 finally stops, this is my way of revenge against custom card reviewers who disrespected me with racist comments.

If you wanted to swore revenge, swore revenge on Rocket2, not all Custom Card Reviewer. The rest of them simply no longer care the moment you choose not to listen. Which is actually a good move btw.

In that case I want all other custom card reviewers (Saraak, Futuregamer, Christen, etc.) to publicly condemn Rocket2's actions against me. Until that happens I won't stop generalizing.

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Post #18 by KTeknis » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:45 pm

parhelia_0000 wrote:
KTeknis wrote:
parhelia_0000 wrote:Rocket2 has sworn to attack me in the forums wherever I'm being active. Until Rocket2 finally stops, this is my way of revenge against custom card reviewers who disrespected me with racist comments.

If you wanted to swore revenge, swore revenge on Rocket2, not all Custom Card Reviewer. The rest of them simply no longer care the moment you choose not to listen. Which is actually a good move btw.

In that case I want all other custom card reviewers (Saraak, Futuregamer, Christen, etc.) to publicly condemn Rocket2's actions against me. Until that happens I won't stop generalizing.

Tbh I though Saraak already did? He did said something like "Please stop Cyberbullying" and " he's (CM) just as reprehensible as you (Rocket2)... " etc.
And also: Yes, I do think Rocket2's critic should be more polite, and more calm, especially that.
But getting the voice of all of us is a bit hard. Futuregamer for example isn't the type of people who goes into argument. He just care about reviewing cards.
I have interest in badly designed custom cards.
You saw these cards as terrible, I saw them as ideas.

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Post #19 by KTeknis » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:46 pm

Oh, I add one more: Just like Saraak said: Most of us just wanted the flame to end. We probably already condemned him.
I have interest in badly designed custom cards.
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Post #20 by parhelia_0000 » Fri Mar 05, 2021 1:48 pm

KTeknis wrote:
parhelia_0000 wrote:
KTeknis wrote:If you wanted to swore revenge, swore revenge on Rocket2, not all Custom Card Reviewer. The rest of them simply no longer care the moment you choose not to listen. Which is actually a good move btw.

In that case I want all other custom card reviewers (Saraak, Futuregamer, Christen, etc.) to publicly condemn Rocket2's actions against me. Until that happens I won't stop generalizing.

Tbh I though Saraak already did? He did said something like "Please stop Cyberbullying" and " he's (CM) just as reprehensible as you (Rocket2)... " etc.
And also: Yes, I do think Rocket2's critic should be more polite, and more calm, especially that.
But getting the voice of all of us is a bit hard. Futuregamer for example isn't the type of people who goes into argument. He just care about reviewing cards.

Not good enough. Futuregamer's "type" is the type who refuses to genuinely acknowledge the fact that there are serious problems with those who spew racist remarks and call themselves "custom card reviewers."


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