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A deck based around giving "bad luck" to your opponent, it works by giving "Shion" that prevents the opponent from attacking and inflicting damage. Most cards prevent the destruction of all "Yorigami"s from both sides.

https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=6591067

Any feedback would help me and any sort of criticism would be pretty much appreciated! ^-^

That looks interesting. A little concerned that there's only 3 card that can give your opponent Shion, but maybe that's enough.
Also the searcher spell's effect can be combined, but I don't know if it's a good idea or not.
Try bringing them to a duel and ask your opponent their opinions. Usually helps