https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=232685 - Its very similar to obelisk the tormentor, minus its "tribute 2: destroy all opponents monsters" effect.
i made this to see if ppl think this is balanced or not. if its not, ill rebalance it!
ok, is this DIVINE balanced for your tastes?
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ok, is this DIVINE balanced for your tastes?
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Are you actually going to rebalance it or are you going to throw a tantrum? Because here are my list of issues with the card:
- The spacing in the effects are not needed. At all.
- The effect of "If this card is destroyed, you lose the duel." is a bit overkill.
- The protection of other named cards while also having the stats of Obelisk and a "Cannot be destroyed by card effects" protection is overkill.
- The wording on your card effect protection should read as "Cannot be targeted or destroyed by card effects." As it's already implied that it's your opponent's effects.
You might wanna do some research on card text wording and some minor spelling/grammar issues as well as fix those four issues.
- The spacing in the effects are not needed. At all.
- The effect of "If this card is destroyed, you lose the duel." is a bit overkill.
- The protection of other named cards while also having the stats of Obelisk and a "Cannot be destroyed by card effects" protection is overkill.
- The wording on your card effect protection should read as "Cannot be targeted or destroyed by card effects." As it's already implied that it's your opponent's effects.
You might wanna do some research on card text wording and some minor spelling/grammar issues as well as fix those four issues.
I noticed that this wolf cannot activate its effect during the turn it's summoned, thanks to the wording: "Once per turn: You can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Wolf" or "Wolves" monster from your hand. You cannot Summon other monsters during the same turn in which you activated and resolved this effect. (You can still Normal Set).
If it's intentional, the effect is pretty much useless, otherwise you should change the effect to "for the rest of this turn" instead of "during the turn".
Also you should specify if this Wolf is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned with 3 tributes, remember that there are cards like Raviel or D-Hero Plasma that Special Summon themselves via 3 tributes, while the god cards are Normal Summons.
If it's intentional, the effect is pretty much useless, otherwise you should change the effect to "for the rest of this turn" instead of "during the turn".
Also you should specify if this Wolf is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned with 3 tributes, remember that there are cards like Raviel or D-Hero Plasma that Special Summon themselves via 3 tributes, while the god cards are Normal Summons.
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