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Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 4:12 pm
by AnimeMasterDub
These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D (shelved due to too many risks and complications)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10512024 Blue-Eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10514286 Blackwing (shelved due to people saying blackwing synchro monsters are outdated)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10516978 Melodious
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10517048 Red-Eyes ( Do not suggest Dragoon)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10519816 SuperHeavy Samurai
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10519010 Harpie
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10521523 Abyss Actors (hard work in progress)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10536847 Elemental (Do not suggest mask cards)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10536953 Kuriboh (Honestly not my best work)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10539439 BLS
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10542384 Evil Rock
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10556940 Galaxy-Eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10557533 Toon
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10557603 Amazon
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10557668 Summoned Skull
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10566375 Ancient Gear
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10608524 Cyber Dragon
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10608569 CyberDark
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10658211 Gearfried
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10675630 Goyo

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 4:44 pm
by Lil Oldman
D/D/D looks awful, no offense. Berfomet, Cerberus, Apocalypse, Maxwell and Doom Armageddon don't add to a final board. At most, I would play 1 leonidas and 1 D 'arc.
Id also increase the amount of Lamias, Necro and Swirl slime, and Kepler to 3 (Maybe only necro at 2). They are important combo pieces. Where are you keeping Abyss Ragnarok and Thomas? They are really good cards for D/D/D What are you even planning to set with Gilgamesh? Pendulum Summoning isn't as good in DDD as in other archetypes.
Contract Change and Human Recourses are extremely slow for such underwhealming effects. Only trap wirth playing in DDD is Cotract with the witch.
The extra deck is a big mess and is missing important cards like Odd-eyes burst, Genghis and High Ceasar. Also, no rank 8s? No Number 38 or Kali Yuga?

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 4:48 pm
by AnimeMasterDub
Lil Oldman wrote:D/D/D looks awful, no offense. Berfomet, Cerberus, Apocalypse, Maxwell and Doom Armageddon don't add to a final board. At most, I would play 1 leonidas and 1 D 'arc.
Id also increase the amount of Lamias, Necro and Swirl slime, and Kepler to 3 (Maybe only necro at 2). They are important combo pieces. Where are you keeping Abyss Ragnarok and Thomas? They are really good cards for D/D/D What are you even planning to set with Gilgamesh? Pendulum Summoning isn't as good in DDD as in other archetypes.
Contract Change and Human Recourses are extremely slow for such underwhealming effects. Only trap wirth playing in DDD is Cotract with the witch.
The extra deck is a big mess and is missing important cards like Odd-eyes burst, Genghis and High Ceasar. Also, no rank 8s? No Number 38 or Kali Yuga?

to be fair I was using duel links as a base for the d/d/d

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 11:39 pm
by Fredblade
AnimeMasterDub wrote:These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D



Why are you playing "Dark Magic Veil" when you can just play Monster Reborn, also why not playing 3 rod? It's literally your only good Normal Summon of the entire deck.

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 11:47 pm
by AnimeMasterDub
Fredblade wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D



Why are you playing "Dark Magic Veil" when you can just play Monster Reborn, also why not playing 3 rod? It's literally your only good Normal Summon of the entire deck.

what if my dark spellcaster is in my hand

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 11:48 pm
by Lil Oldman
AnimeMasterDub wrote:
Fredblade wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D



Why are you playing "Dark Magic Veil" when you can just play Monster Reborn, also why not playing 3 rod? It's literally your only good Normal Summon of the entire deck.

what if my dark spellcaster is in my hand

All but DMG and DM can SS themselves from the hand. Rod you never want to SS.

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 11:50 pm
by AnimeMasterDub
Lil Oldman wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:
Fredblade wrote:

Why are you playing "Dark Magic Veil" when you can just play Monster Reborn, also why not playing 3 rod? It's literally your only good Normal Summon of the entire deck.

what if my dark spellcaster is in my hand

All but DMG and DM can SS themselves from the hand. Rod you never want to SS.

i know the dark magic veil is for the dark magician and dark magician girl

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 11:55 pm
by Lil Oldman
AnimeMasterDub wrote:
Lil Oldman wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:what if my dark spellcaster is in my hand

All but DMG and DM can SS themselves from the hand. Rod you never want to SS.

i know the dark magic veil is for the dark magician and dark magician girl

Bruh you already run Eternal Soul, you don't need 2 ways to summon that guy. Specially when 1 of the ways is unsearchable

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 12:08 am
by AnimeMasterDub
Lil Oldman wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:
Lil Oldman wrote:All but DMG and DM can SS themselves from the hand. Rod you never want to SS.

i know the dark magic veil is for the dark magician and dark magician girl

Bruh you already run Eternal Soul, you don't need 2 ways to summon that guy. Specially when 1 of the ways is unsearchable

i guess you do make a valid point again duel links had partial influence maybe ill add a monster reborn and get rid of dark magic veil

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 12:30 am
by DarwisBellium92
AnimeMasterDub wrote:These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D

Dark Magician without Red-Eyes B. Dragon for Dragoon is useless.
In short, it is to redo the decklist from scratch and review it with the new supports.

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 12:32 am
by AnimeMasterDub
DarwisBellium92 wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D

Dark Magician without Red-Eyes B. Dragon for Dragoon is useless.
In short, it is to redo the decklist from scratch and review it with the new supports.

what do you think Timaeus is for?

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 3:05 am
by Fredblade
AnimeMasterDub wrote:
DarwisBellium92 wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D

Dark Magician without Red-Eyes B. Dragon for Dragoon is useless.
In short, it is to redo the decklist from scratch and review it with the new supports.

what do you think Timaeus is for?


You could also run Magicalized Fusion for making a second Dragoon and running verte so you don't have to draw it.

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 8:21 am
by DarwisBellium92
AnimeMasterDub wrote:
DarwisBellium92 wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D

Dark Magician without Red-Eyes B. Dragon for Dragoon is useless.
In short, it is to redo the decklist from scratch and review it with the new supports.

what do you think Timaeus is for?

Maybe yes

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 12:14 pm
by AnimeMasterDub
Fredblade wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:
DarwisBellium92 wrote:Dark Magician without Red-Eyes B. Dragon for Dragoon is useless.
In short, it is to redo the decklist from scratch and review it with the new supports.

what do you think Timaeus is for?


You could also run Magicalized Fusion for making a second Dragoon and running verte so you don't have to draw it.

good idea ill add 1 of each to the deck
also to everyone there has been an update to the original post

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 8:46 pm
by AnimeMasterDub
As of April 21, 2022 4:45 PM US east coast time the original post has been updated

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 12:32 am
by Slitina
AnimeMasterDub wrote:These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D (shelved due to too many risks and complications)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10512024 Blue-Eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10514286 Blackwing
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10516978 Melodious

As a Blackwing player I had pain looking at that deck list but can you explain yr thought process in that deck because it’s more like you just grabbed every card that had “blackwing” in its name and made it into a deck.

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 12:40 am
by AnimeMasterDub
Slitina wrote:
AnimeMasterDub wrote:These decks I made from scratch. Any constructive criticism would be helpful
Note: SAYING SCRAP THE DECK AND MAKE a "Insert name of deck that I don't like" ISN'T CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10499694 Dark Magician
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10497059 Odd-eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10508395 D/D/D (shelved due to too many risks and complications)
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10512024 Blue-Eyes
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10514286 Blackwing
https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=10516978 Melodious

As a Blackwing player I had pain looking at that deck list but can you explain yr thought process in that deck because it’s more like you just grabbed every card that had “blackwing” in its name and made it into a deck.

I used duel links as base started from there

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 12:53 am
by Renji Asuka
I'm going to speak about that blackwing deck. My friend who has been playing Blackwings for a very long time would see this build and immediately think it'd belong in the trashcan.

First, Shura is no longer ran in the deck. It's too slow.
Second, Simoon is God Tier why wouldn't you max that out?
Third, Elphin the Raven, just...why? It's bad. If you have a Blackwing monster on the field, you already normal summoned. Making this card dead.
Fourth, Vayu is no longer good.
Fifth, Sirocco the Dawn, no longer ran in the deck.
Sixth, drop gladius. You don't need it.
Seventh, Drop the Drizzle, no reason to play an extender that makes you lose a monster.
Eighth, Raptor Wing Strike? ewww.
Nineth, Fake Feather? That is doing nothing, too slow.
Tenth, Black Wing Revenge? No....
Eleventh, as cute as Anti Reverse is. Don't.
Twelfth, Black Sonic, see above.


This is not even touching the extra deck problems.

Blackwing - Auster the South Wind is really good
Blackwing - Breeze the Zephyr is also pretty good.
Allure of Darkness says hi!
Raidraptor - Strangle Lanius great extender for the deck. Have a dark? Special Summon it!
Raidraptor - Wise Strix can let you play into Ultimate Falcon.
Raidraptor - Force Strix can literally search you a blackwing.
Phantom Knights' Rank-Up-Magic Force Banish monsters from GY for the next card
Dark Requiem Xyz Dragon Hello I can negate a card!

This isn't even going into Tri-Brigade variant

There's more I can probably add, but my knowledge on the deck is limited as I mostly watch my friend play the deck.

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 12:59 am
by Renji Asuka
I think your biggest problem is, using Duel Links as a base.

Don't do that, never do that. Strategies that work there won't work in the TCG/OCG. The TCG/OCG has a better cardpool while a different banlist. So things you'd normally get away with on Duel Links wouldn't apply at all.

Next, you need to learn how to identify what cards are good and what cards are bad.

You also need to have an end game in mind and focus on that.

If I recall you said earlier you like to plan for things in case stuff happens so you end up planning for too much stuff. But if you focus on making sure your deck can play (for example stopping hand traps with Called By or even Crossout Designator), you should be fine.

You also should be running staples as well. Monster Reborn is legal, so why not run it in every deck?

Re: Decks I made from scratch

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 1:06 am
by Lil Oldman
Monster Reborn is legal, so why not run it in every deck?

me when powercrept