Duelingbook Forum

Here's the second card that I just finished drawing today. I also changed all of my card's effect. Though, I feel like it's a little overboard.

https://www.duelingbook.com/card?id=1985344

Agil Firmum - The hyperactive, hot-blooded, and heart of the Golden Pentragon member.

You drew this yourself? https://i.imgur.com/63EuyhS.jpg It's gorgeous! It's miles better than all the artworks I've drawn. You're a real talented artist, and with more practice you'll get better at this. That being said, I prefer to see maybe a few more cards of this archetype before I give feedbac...

I see that you just straight up changing the existing cads, as the artwork of Chase Zinoc in the old decklist is changed to the new one. Well It's fine to make your own artwork, after all you're probably already pretty good at drawing already. (Chase Zinoc look great). The core mechanic of the deck...

Hey guys, I know I haven't on here for so long. I'm still revising my custom archetype, that is mostly lore-based much like the World Legacy archetype and the Dogmatika archetype. Nonetheless, I'm still searching for a creative mechanic that would fit my archetype based on its lore and character tha...

Looking back at my customs. Man, it certainly is hard to balance them. Whenever I come back to look at my custom cards, sometimes I think to myself "isn't this a little too strong?" and such.

KTeknis wrote:Wait, actually no, I just missread your second last post with the last one. Sry

all good, but yeah, I agree that I may have made a bit too much for the GP Lore. I was thinking I should make situationally bad cards for the archetype but idk. Still thinking of ideas

KTeknis wrote:Dude, you double posted.
But still, I start to think this deck would have too many cards. Also, Yukimura Sanada again?

Lol, did I really?

Hello, everyone! I am back, this time, with the introduction of Team "Stalwart". I showed a sneak peak of what they can do, but I was uninspired by their effect--so I changed them! Formerly, they were monsters that Sp.Summoned themselves when you control a "Stalwart" monster, but...

I also want to introduce some more cards that are part of the Golden Pentragon. More supports of the Golden Pentragon, and a sneak-peak of the next team--Team Stalwart. With every new cards part of GP world, more lore is added. Link to the new cards: https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=7748886 Lore ...

I realized I forgot to add lore about Team DRAKE as they are part of the Golden Pentragon lore. Their backstories are not connected (except maybe Yokhim Maximus and Jeck Lauheart). Each of them are 5 random people who wish to attend the tournament for their own reasons. Like Kenji, who is the leader...

Are those Team Drake's their own archetype or works with the Golden Pentragons? Also your archetypes are very lore-heavy. Are you planning to make some an archetype that sorta bridges the archetypes together like the Zefra or World Legacy? Also I probably should try giving my own criticism some tim...

So I updated the Spell cards to fit the general lore of the archetype. They still feel a little underwhelming. Nowhere near as strong the Trap cards, but that's fine. I also wanted to introduce a new piece of lore, that includes a new archetype that is a part of the Golden Pentragon Lore. Meet Team ...

It is impossible on your own. The only way would be able to delete them is either: A) Ask each person in te thread to delete their most recent post. (First I would delete the answer, then you, then KTeknis and so on and so forth. OR B) Explain a moderator the situation and ask them if they can dele...

You're still working on your deck and posting it here? That's some dedication there mate. Keep up the good work! Thank you! I've been taking Rocket2 and Futuregamer's advice and trying to make it feel like it's a Deck that reflects on its effect based on its lore rather than being a meta defining d...

I changed the 5 MD monster's effect once more. This time, to reflect more on their "friendship" kind of theme where they always have each other's back. Now, they have battle protection if you control another "GP" monster. Wasn't sure how to word it where it can't be itself but an...

So I went onto reworking the MD monster's effect, giving them a Summoned Effect of sending 1 "Golden Pentragon" monster with a different Attribute to the GY, then doing another effect. In my honest opinion, I don't like it because it gives too much advantage even though it's strictly sendi...

Changed

Deadline has now passed, please add my two additional cards to the card list. Oh, yeah, forgotten, also a bit busy with collage before. For Renji Asuka, Christen57, and Saraak: You can post 2 more cards to the cardlist. . For ShinRyu: You can post three since you only posted 1 before. As for Parhel...

So I see that my card is bottom tier. Valid, btw. I knew I wanted "Forumblitz Archer" a little generic, and giving it generic protection effects too. Then Christen mentioned Gemini monsters, and I completely forgot about that too. I tried buffing it by giving it Down-Right, Down, and Down-...

Like a core mechanic that I'm trying to go for is the theme of "friendship" between each of the five cards such as "If there are x number of "Golden Pentragon"; Special Summon this card (from your hand)." That's pretty basic, but bro, it's boring. And I'm glad Futuregam...